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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 9 (Final chapter)
Shane wasn’t totally shocked by the question, she was surprised Dana was asking her and not Bette or Tina, but she decided to be honest with Dana. “Dana, I’ve always felt you and Alice had a very special connection. I don’t know if it just a great friendship or maybe something stronger then friendship. But I do see sparks between the two of you. As for if it worth it that’s something you have to decide for yourself. But I do believe that if you don’t sometimes test the boundaries, you’ll one day wonder what if. And I don’t know about you but I would hate to be 70 one day and wondering what if I had taken that risk.”
Dana thought about what Shane said, then she looked at her and smiled “I don’t want any what if either. Will you excuse me for a minute?”
Shane watched as Dana made her way toward the bathroom to use her cell phone in a quieter part of the Planet.
ALICE’S MINI
Alice and Jenny had rode in almost complete silence during the drive to Jenny’s home. So when Alice’s cell phone rang, she couldn’t help but be a little startled. When she noticed the caller ID said Dana she wondered what she might be calling about.
First thing Alice noticed was how nervous Dana sounded, it was cute but strange. She knew there was no way Dana had a lot to drink, because they had left less then 20 minutes earlier and in that time she knew the most Dana would have drank was maybe one drink.
So it floored Alice when Dana finally stopped stuttering and stammering and asked her out on a date. After restating the question back to Dana, just to make sure she had heard right, Alice had agreed.
Then she remembered Jenny was still in the car. When she looked over at Jenny, Jenny was sitting straight up with the biggest grin on her face. She looked back out the window simply stating, “It’s about time.”
ALICE’S APARTMENT
Alice had already decided she was going to cancel her meeting in the morning with her editor and email her article because there was no way she was sleeping tonight.
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(24 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
” I want to see the ‘what if’s’ Alice.” SWOOOON! I understand why you left it there- and i’m grateful for the peek at where they end up!THIS story was about fear and healing. I hope i’ve conveyed that i really enjoyed how you wrote this. You did a great job of taking two such well know characters and having them go thru a traumatic experience while remaining ‘Alice’ and ‘Dana’. Can’t wait for what you have next. Short stories sound great! thanks for this story.
Deb i loved it you are fantastic and please keep writing danish because i love it. You are a great writer and i absolutely love all of your stories.
Thanks for this, it ends in the right part. Short stories! Great, a lot please :D
Thanks. Hope to read another story of yours soon
All Dana could say back was “What if it does? – Love that line! Thank you for this wonderful journey with Alice and Dana, you have conveyed their fears and hopes perfectly. So now let’s bring on the short stories!
Yeah I’m the first to comment! Great story and I loved the way it ended. Danish is just meant to be- you just can’t help yourself. Can’t wait till you update your other story!
I smell a sequel, or is it just wishful thinking?
this was a great story I loved it all the way though and I can wait to read some more of your storys that you post so please post a new one soon
“It’s about time!!” lol. This story was really great, even reading those hard things. The recovery is well and Dana in the ned was lovely. Thanks for that danish and waiting for more.
Hey,thank YOU for posting this story.*winks* I enjoyed the dyke drama…*lol* It was great reading something with a twist! Thanks
I agree with Layala Gray! Love that line!Very nice sweet endinG!