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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 9 (Final chapter)
As she paced her floors, several things kept replaying in her head first was the fact that her best friend had asked her out on a date, and the second being Jenny comment.
OK thought Alice let’s think about this, Dana is more important then anyone else in my life. Having a relationship with Dana would be wonderful if it works out. What if it doesn’t work out though, will I lose my best friend? But then again Dana knows me better then anyone and she is still around.
As Alice paced the floor all the self doubt started to surface. Why would Dana want to go out with me, she’s beautiful and she could do so much better. But then again she did ask me out.
Just when Alice had decided there was no way Dana would be interested in her in that way and first thing in the morning she was going to call Dana to cancel, her phone rang.
Alice had to smile once again seeing it was Dana on the other end. “Alice I called because I know you, you’re pacing wondering if we’re making the right decision. Al I don’t know the answer to that, all I know is when I think about getting old you’re always in the picture. I see us laughing and fighting till our dying day. I want to give this a try. I can’t continue to act like I don’t have feelings toward you. I want to see the ‘what if’s’ Alice. I don’t want to spend my life wondering about what could have been.”
Alice had to fight back the tears in hearing how Dana wanted the two of them together even in their old age. “But Dana what if this doesn’t work out?”
All Dana could say back was “What if it does?
ALICE’S APARTMENT NEXT NIGHT
Dana couldn’t believe how nervous she was, this was Alice after all. But she had worked up the courage to ask Alice out on a real date. She had flowers in one hand as she reached to ring the bell.
The End
Guys, I’ll let you use your imaginations as to whether they get together or not. I can’t help but make my stories Danish, but I just didn’t feel like this story should go any future with the romance. You know of course chances are my next story will be a romance.
Sorry for all the delays with this story. I couldn’t fight the writers block I was suffering from. I may take a break from long stories for a while and give myself a break by writing shorter stories.
Thanks again for all of you who continually encouraged me. You guys have no idea how much your feedback both motivates me and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.
Finally a big thanks to Jac for all her encouragement, and proof reading.
Thanks again, Deb
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(24 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
” I want to see the ‘what if’s’ Alice.” SWOOOON! I understand why you left it there- and i’m grateful for the peek at where they end up!THIS story was about fear and healing. I hope i’ve conveyed that i really enjoyed how you wrote this. You did a great job of taking two such well know characters and having them go thru a traumatic experience while remaining ‘Alice’ and ‘Dana’. Can’t wait for what you have next. Short stories sound great! thanks for this story.
Deb i loved it you are fantastic and please keep writing danish because i love it. You are a great writer and i absolutely love all of your stories.
Thanks for this, it ends in the right part. Short stories! Great, a lot please :D
Thanks. Hope to read another story of yours soon
All Dana could say back was “What if it does? – Love that line! Thank you for this wonderful journey with Alice and Dana, you have conveyed their fears and hopes perfectly. So now let’s bring on the short stories!
Yeah I’m the first to comment! Great story and I loved the way it ended. Danish is just meant to be- you just can’t help yourself. Can’t wait till you update your other story!
I smell a sequel, or is it just wishful thinking?
this was a great story I loved it all the way though and I can wait to read some more of your storys that you post so please post a new one soon
“It’s about time!!” lol. This story was really great, even reading those hard things. The recovery is well and Dana in the ned was lovely. Thanks for that danish and waiting for more.
Hey,thank YOU for posting this story.*winks* I enjoyed the dyke drama…*lol* It was great reading something with a twist! Thanks
I agree with Layala Gray! Love that line!Very nice sweet endinG!