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    Before the Fall – Five

    Story written on December 8, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    “What about our parents? Are they still alive?”

    “We’re half sisters, Bette. We shared the same father. He’s dead.”

    “Oh. What about my mother?” Bette asked feeling hesitant for the first time. Maybe she should have let her friends stay. It seemed like Kit was her only family and she lived across the country, so maybe her friends were more like family.

    “I don’t know. I think she’s dead too. I…Maxine wasn’t really keen on keeping me updated on where she was. So…I’m going to go. I’m feelin’ tired.”

    “Okay. It was… nice meeting you.”

    Kit eyed her for a moment.

    “You really don’t remember me do you? I don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing. I’ll be back tomorrow. You like croissants. I’ll bring you some.”

    “And some orange juice, please. I don’t like the orange juice here. Thank you, Kit.”

    “You’re welcome…”

    “So half sisters?”

    “Half.”

    “Was my mother white?” Bette asked.

    “She was.”

    “Hmmm.”

    “Goodbye.”

    “Bye Kit.”

    Bette watched the door close behind Kit and turned her attention to the muted television and turned up the volume. She flicked through the channels with her good hand until she settled on a news channel.

    There was a knock on her door and Bette figured it would be the orderly with her dinner tray.

    “Come in,” Bette called out.

    The door opened and Helena stepped in the look on her face pensive.

    “Hi,” Bette said enthused at the sight of her.

    Helena paused and looked surprised at her greeting.

    “Hello, Bette. How are you feeling?” Helena asked as she stepped into the room and let the door close behind her.

    “Like shit. Everything aches even with the medicine they’re feeding me. Where have you been? I was asking for you earlier.”

    Helena nodded and looked around seeming to avoid eye contact with her.

    “Are you hungry?” Helena asked and raised a greasy bag of food.

    “Way to avoid my question. But to answer your question, yes. What is that? It smells good.”

    “This little Mexican place you love. Do you need some help sitting up?” Helena asked as she took her seat and began to take out food.

    “No. This nifty little remote control comes in handy,” Bette said as she raised her bed to an upright position.

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    1. I got my fix….Now I want more..Now I have more questions than answers. How did Bette respond to Tina? Did Tina know Bette had the hots for Tina?? PPS. Early Christmas present PLEASE ;-)

    3. And once again… Great chapter, Speed_Racer ! I’m very impressed, you have really set yourself a thrilling but very challenging task here with this amnesia… That was so unexpected, but quite fascinating. Your heroines are truly of a different kind. I like this a lot. I can only say hats off to you as you are pulling it off beautifully ! Please post again soon !

    5. Now that I’ve had a good night sleep and re-read your the story and the prelude I have a better understanding… WOW tons of drama for our heroines…Helena is really stuck between a rock and a hard place on this one… And poor Tina..When is she going to finally have her face to face with Bette? She is really going to be hurt by the new Bette..Hope you are feeling better Speedy. Thanks for the update. As always, this story is awesone…

    7. That’s interesting! You leave me wanting for more! I don’t know how Bette, Helena and Tina are going to resolve this little conundrum of theirs. Anyway, maybe as Bette gets to know herself, Helena can understand Bette better and start up a new relationship. I love your story! Really really do! Please continue! Early Christmas Present please! Happy New Year!

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