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    Before the Fall – Four

    “Helena! What’s wrong? Is it Bette?”

    Helena didn’t bother to look up as she heard Alice’s voice and her running feet.

    “Oh, Helena don’t tell me Bette’s dead! Helena? What’s wrong?”

    “Alice,” Helena moaned. “I swear I didn’t mean to. I…I don’t know what I was thinking.”

    “Is she dead? I’m going in there,” Alice snapped stepping past Helena.

    Helena dropped her hands and grabbed Alice’s arm.

    “Alice,” she said desperately. “Please believe me when I tell you I… I…”

    Alice peered at her some of the anxiousness leaving her face but now it was replaced by acute worry.

    “Helena…what did you do?” Alice demanded.

    “She’s alive, Alice. She’s awake. I… I was going to leave. I swear it. I was. But somehow…words…and I just…”

    “You’re scaring me, Helena. What. Did. You. Do.”

    Helena couldn’t speak, she could only shake her head in despair.

    Alice brushed past Helena and into Bette’s room.

    “Bette you’re awake! We were so worried. Oh! I’m going to hug you now,” Alice exclaimed hurrying over to Bette.

    Bette stiffened and held up her hands.

    “Helena…who’s this? Who are you? D…don’t touch me.”

    Alice turned to stare at Helena who had followed her in. Helena glanced away and at the ground.

    “Bette don’t you know who I am? I’m Alice! You’re best friend. And this is Hele–“

    “Helena. My girlfriend,” Bette said with a slight frown staring at Alice.

    Alice sucked in a deep breath that sounded suspiciously like a gasp.

    “Helena…” Alice gritted.

    “I’m sorry!” Helena said sharply.

    “Okay! How are we feeling, Bette? I’m Dr. Tafari I’m going to be looking at your leg. Hello ladies, would you mind giving us a minute? Brenda’s going to help you sit up now Bette.”

    Alice nodded and turned on her heel grabbing Helena’s arm as she left the room. As soon as the door was closed she whirled on Helena and glared at her, anger fairly vibrating off her.

    “What the hell was that? How come Bette doesn’t know me? And what the hell is going on where she thinks you’re her girlfriend?” Alice half yelled.

    “She’s… Well her memory isn’t right. She doesn’t know who she is or why she’s in the hospital! Dr. Toms said something about this being maybe just a case of the brain catching up with her body. I mean it can’t possibly be–“

    “Are you saying she has amnesia? Amnesia? Seriously? Are we–did we walk into a soap opera while I wasn’t looking? My God! And what? Helena why does Bette think you’re her girlfriend?”

    “What?!”

    Both women turned to face Tina who looked completely shocked at what she’d just heard.

    “I can explain,” Helena said calmly straightening up trying to appear calm and in control.

    “You’d better. Cuz how Bette thinks you two are together, that deserves a boat load of explaining,” Alice muttered.

    Timing, Helena thought.

    She had the worst bloody timing in the world.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    Comments

    1. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    2. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    3. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    4. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    5. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    6. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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