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    Before the Fall – Four

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    When Bette woke up she was going to leave, she thought suddenly. There was no reason why she should stay. She couldn’t get sucked back in and live like she’d lived before. She wasn’t going to do that to herself or to Bette. Bette wanted her gone and she would be gone.

    She would just make sure that Bette was okay and then leave.

    She knew it was cowardly but she didn’t want deal with Bette. Because no doubt from the phone call she’d gotten, Bette was extremely upset at her.

    For what she wasn’t sure.

    All she’d done was move.

    And Bette had wanted her to move.

    Of course she was glossing over the whys, and the hows.

    Bette was going to be fine, she reassured herself once more.

    She glanced at Bette and was so startled she jerked back in her chair.

    “You’re awake! Bette…”

    Helena jumped to her feet and hurried closer to the bed. Bette’s eyes never left her as she approached.

    “I’m going to go get a nurse, Bette. I’ll be right back.”

    What happened next was a blur. The doctor and nurses surrounded Bette’s bed and took the intubation tube out. People were reading off stats and reading charts. The doctor was talking to Bette, and a nurse was holding a cup of water with a straw to Bette’s lips.

    “Your throat might be a little sore. We had to intubate you to help regulate your breathing while you were unconscious. How do you feel?” Dr. Toms asked as he bent over Bette.

    Bette looked around her eyes landing on Helena who was standing nervously near the door.

    “Wh–what? Who a-are you? W-where a-am I?” Bette gasped out coughing, and shuddering in pain.

    “Bette, can you tell me how you’re feeling? Look at me,” Dr. Toms said gently trying to get Bette’s attention back on him. He was holding a pen light in his hand and was trying to get a look at Bette’s eyes.

    Bette’s eyes landed on Helena again.

    “W-who’s B-Bette?” Bette asked blankly.

     ““

    Helena pressed her back against the wall breathing heavily, her hands were shaking as she pressed them to her face.

    “Oh my God,” she mumbled shaking her head. “Oh God. Oh, no.”

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    3. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    5. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    7. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    10. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    11. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    14. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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