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    Before the Fall – Nine

    Shane nodded as if she understood.

    “Alice?” Shane called out glancing towards the kitchen.

    “We’re outside by the pool,” Alice yelled back.

    “I’m going to go lay down,” Bette said. Her head was pounding and her leg was killing her. She really wanted the painkillers to kick in any minute so she could have some relief.

    “You sure? Want us to leave?” Shane asked turning her attention back to Bette.

    “No. Stay. I might take a nap. But you guys don’t have to leave. If I’m asleep then wake me up in an hour.”

    “What do you want for dinner?”

    “Whatever.”

    “Really, Bette? Are you sure?”

    “Of course I’m sure! I do know what I’m saying. It would be nice if you all didn’t constantly question me,” Bette snapped rolling towards her bedroom.

    “Sorry,” Shane said contritely.

    “Don’t be sorry! Just wake me up in an hour,” Bette grumbled as she entered her bedroom shutting the door behind her.

    Feeling tired and irritated Bette maneuvered herself onto her bed after taking care of her shoes and closed her eyes.

    She easily drifted off to sleep.

    ““

    “Did you talk to her?” Kit demanded angrily leaning back in her ratty recliner.

    “What was I supposed to say?” Bette asked fearfully staying by the doorway of the kitchen. She watched as her sister almost spit the gulp of beer she’d taken out.

    “What? Girl! You were supposed to tell your Mama to come pick you up! What the hell did you say to her? Is she coming or not?”

    “I…I just told her I missed her. She didn’t have time to talk. She didn’t really say anything. I’m sorry, Katy.”

    “’Course you’re sorry. You’re always sorry! How about you stop being sorry and do as you’re fucking told, huh? You can’t do nothin’ right. Get out of my sight. Get your ass outta here, Bette!” Kit yelled throwing her beer can in Bette’s direction.

    Bette turned and scurried up the stairs.

    “And don’t you be stomping like that! If you wake David I fucking swear… Don’t you come down until I fucking say so,” Kit yelled after her.

    Bette wiped angrily at the tears falling down her cheeks as she slipped into David’s room and leaned back against the door.

    Comments

    1. Wow! It would be so strange having no memory of the past and then have it all come rushing back at you like that. Thanks for the update–looking forward to the next!

    2. oh my god! Oh my god! All the memories came flooding back? That’s going to be really intense. What’s going to happen? Why? How? When? Amazing, Speedy, you write stuff close to my heart. Lovely writing! Thanks for the soon update! I’m so glad to read it! It’s perfect! :D

    3. You do know that I was meaning to write that I like the friendship between everyone right? The middle part was hillarious! Then the suddenly gaining back memory part just took my breath away. hehe

    4. This was good…really good. Will Bette let everyone know that she got her memory back right away? Will she call Helena? Will Helena come back to LA? Bette can’t travel right now. More please.

    5. wow Speedy this was soo cool. i really feel for Bette getting all your memories back like that. I loved the pillow fight and how the friends all stick together.PPS

    6. Your writing is great as usual. You gave us some laughter, the dedication of friends, as well as self awareness on one’s self. You are an excellent writer and it’s a pleasure to read your stories. Thank You!

    7. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I becam e addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    8. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I became addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    9. I am on the edge of my seat here, i cannot believe you just stopped there!! Meanie! You are one incredible writer, truly in awe of your style, love it! Thank you, pps.

    10. oh hell i’m a tibetter cheering for bette to get her brain back and make it good with helena!!!! damn u r good…pps…i’m on the edge of my seat…..yeah, i do feel 4 Tina but she should go get her a woman who truly loves her, shes too nice to play 2nd best….

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