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Bette Forgets 11
It was a lot of damage, Winters affirms
Once the glass is cleared she rinses out my hands and then they begin stitching them up. Wow I had fifty five stitches in my right hand and twenty seven in the left. Lots and lots indeed. After bandaging my hands quite heavily Doctor Winters smiles at me.
How would you like to hear something good for a change?
What do you mean, Tina asks
Do you want to hear your babys heart beat?
My eyes widened at this. During all of this excitement I had almost forgotten about the baby thats growing inside of me.
Could we, I ask
Lets go to a room shall we?
Tina and Kit help me up and we walk to a room with Doctor Winters. Getting on the table she passes this wand over my stomach which doesnt look like Im pregnant.
Its too early at this point to get a definitive picture of the baby but with a little finagling we can hear… she moves the wand around and we hear the most beautiful sound in the world, The heart beat, she remarks softly
I grin from ear to ear at hearing this delicate little heartbeat of the child I am carrying. Looking over at Tina I see tears in her eyes as she holds on to my arm.
T, I whisper, Thats our baby.
She looks at me and beams the most beautiful smile in my direction.
Im so happy for you baby sister, Kit remarks giving me a small hug
Does everything sound okay, Tina asks after clearing her throat
Winters listens for another moment, Everything is sounding okay. We need to get you back in here for an ultrasound within the next couple of weeks. First we need to fatten you up a little, she remarks to me with a small smile, Theres only so much being fed through a tube can do for you.
Well make sure to fatten her up.
We listen to the heartbeat for a few minutes more and then the Doctor takes the wand from my stomach and I get myself all fixed up again.
Listen Tina, Kit I would like to talk with Bette for a minute alone, Doctor Winters begins
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(74 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
I like this. It’s heavy but good. Great job!
pretty f*cking cute. ;)
great story please keep the chapters coming Thank you
I love this story :))
I like this story. Bette is so innocent and cute. Tina has such patience. Thanks
I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)
I really like this story. Just wanted to let you know, since I don’t always leave a comment.
Thanks for another great chapter. Love seeing this side of Bette. Love seeing the interaction between Tina and Bette.
I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.
Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.
I love this story. I can’t wait for more.
I love this story. This chapter had a really cute ending. Can’t wait for the next one!!
great story, can’t wait for more..
I LOVE THIS STORY..I WANT MORE PLEASE
This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!
i like this… bette is so cute!!!
I love the innocence of Bette in this story. I hope seeing the suspect in the lineup doesn’t freak her out too much.
Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.
Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)
this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.
I loving Bette and Tina…and this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I really like this Bette, she is so funny and cute. Hope she be ok in the lineup. Post soon, thank you!
I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….
I just caught up reading your story. I love it! great job, please continue, soon.
I love this story.
I continue to enjoy this story. Good story line and nice relationship between B & T
This is just getting better and better as we go along. Now this is one story I would not miss…can´t wait for an update. Post soon
Bette will be able to make it through this with the support of her family.
i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p