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Bette Forgets 13
I cant help but laugh at just how cute she is being right now.
Whats so funny, she asks giving me a bright smile
You.
Im glad I can entertain you this early in the morning, Bette remarks turning to me and rolling her eyes
I laugh at this again.
Hey did you know that technically speaking you are married to a twenty two year old?
Dear Lord I hadnt thought about that.
I mean outwardly and…in reality Im forty but in here, she tapped her head, Twenty two.
At least Im not robbing the cradle, I remark with a grin
You arent at that. Now you cant make old jokes to me, well you could but…you know what I mean.
How do you know I make fun of your age?
She frowns at this and shrugs, I dont know. I just do.
I smile at this and watch as her frown turns deeper and she starts to blush. What could she possibly be thinking?
Bette clears her throat, I know helping me wipe my ***** was distinctly uncomfortable for both of us but the next task I have in mind may not be.
What is she talking about?
I need to take a shower.
I raise an eyebrow at this and smile, Oh that will be my pleasure to help you with that. You could take a bath instead you know.
Her eyes light up at the prospect of a bath, Oh a bath.
Shaking my head I life, You make it sound like you havent…no wait you havent had a bath in three months.
Unless you consider a sponge bath a bath. Im glad I was unconscious for that.
I cannot get over how hilarious this new Bette is. I really believe she isnt trying to be funny it is just coming out that way, but wow what a difference.
Do you feel up to having the girls come over today, I ask Bette
She ***** her head to the side, I actually do want to see them. I think its time that I get to know them again. You know what I mean?
I do know what you mean.
She smiles at me, Not that I dont enjoy this conversation but I really want that bath.
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(56 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
You are doing a great job I can’t believe you are writing so many great stories at once. We will patiently wait for wherever you decide to go with this. BTW This Bette is adorable and she’s survived some harsh stuff. THanks for this update.
Great pace and flow here. I like the interaction between Bette and Tina here. It’s so much at ease and Bette discovered who she was in the past as she goes on reliving her memories each day. Tina’s reaction to this was great as she never really see this version of Bette before, funny and opened. I’m truly enjoying this story and can’t wait for the therapy session to start. Potential drama and also some fun ahead I feel. So, let’s get it started in here. Oops..that Black Eyed Peas keeps on playing in my head…lol
You are really great and imaginative writer who can handles alot of stories in one go.
You are truly amazing and talented…:)
Rest well and have that brain of yours recharge cos I’m waiting always for something new from you.
multitasking…very good. Please continue each story….i love them all. thanks
this is so original and wonderfully written. I love have you write Bette…so innocent and open.
Aw baby,
Another triumph of a chapter. Seeing Bette so helpless but determined to move on is showing Tina the woman she fell in love with. Having Tina be the strong one is just the topic that Bette needs and wants. This is making her aware of her one true love.
Admire that fact that you are true to the story; Bette’s hands haven’t miraclously healed.
Awaiting you next post on any of your fab stories but this is my fave.
I love the way this story is going and I love the way Bette is so playful and child like. I hope when (if) she gets her memory back that she doesn’t lose that
I love this story! I like how Bette has a young mentality and that the connection between T&B is still there. Can’t wait for the next therapy session to find out what’s going to happen.
post post post soon. lovin the stroy
i agree with everyone………this is wonderful……and i hope to see an update soon……
You are such an amazing writer.I love the connection with bette & Tina PLEASE POST AS SOON AS YOUR BRAIN IS RARING TO GO…..
Love all of your stories, but this is my favorite. Don’t keep us waiting too long!
Okay, I don’t have the words that will do you or your amazing talent justice. You are the best and that still does not describe the awe I have of you. This is my favorite story from you. I was so happy when I logged on and saw it. You make me very happy. I just might email you so we can continue this conversation. Please post this story again soon.Get you some much needed sleep. Good night :-)
I’m really liking BrattyBette. Should be interesting to see how she and T develop as a couple.
Every chapter a treat – thank you for this awesome story.
Great chapter. This new Bette is so cute and funny and adorable, love it. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thank you!
Bette still cute in this chapter. I love it. Get some rest and get those fingers typin! I need more :D
I love the way you have them speaking in the first person, narrating their own story!
Thanks for posting another chapter. I look forward to your next one.
I just went back and read all three of your stories, bringing myself current…and I have to say that each one is unique and well written. They are funny and uplifting…even when you are writing about Bette being shot, and raped…you still bring out the positive. What a great future in writing you have! Thanks!
I just love this story Raba. Bette is so different in this story of yours. Can´t wait for an update – please make it soon.
I’m not reading the other comments because I don’t want mine to be tainted. Simply this: This is FABULOUS. The story is great, the emotions are so well expressed, the dialogue is true and moves, the characters are delightful. RK1, you’re not ceasing to amaze me. Wow. And thanks.
Thank you for this story. It’s very interesting to see relations between B &T in this situation.
You amaze me and your stories are remarkable! I love this Bette, she is so adorable …I hope she doesn’t lose these endearing qualities after she regains more of her memory. Thanks again for all your hard work!
Bette is SOOO cute=) She kinda reminds me of myself…of course less gorgeous, much much shorter, and just a tad bit more goofy:-D I just hope the therapy session goes well. KICK ARSE story, I love it!! Thank you!
Oh how I love this, all the way from Bette’s funniest to Tina’s loving and kindness.