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Bette Forgets 13
I laugh at this, Just let me get the bath water started and get you some plastic bags for those mummy hands of yours.
Oh such the comedian, Bette remarked sarcastically
I laugh as I get up and go into the bathroom to start the bath water. After this is started I go into the kitchen to get some plastic bags and some rubber bands. They really should make gloves or something that are water proof. Youd think wed have the technology for that. Going back into the bathroom I stop dead in my tracks and my eyes widened.
Standing in the middle of the bathroom naked as the day she was born was my love, my life; Bette. She has her back to the door and is watching the bathtub fill up with water. At hearing my squeak she turns around and gazes at me. I gasp for this is the first time I got a really, really good look at her body.
Thats part of the reason I freaked yesterday, she comments directing her hand to where there is no mirror over the bathroom sink
Were getting that replaced today.
I understand, I speak softly
I look past the scars and see her, that luscious body that I have been craving for so long. I watch as her nipples harden and as Bette blushes.
Sorry, she says shyly, Involuntary reaction on my part I swear, she remarks with a cheeky grin
Uh huh I totally believe that.
I walk past her and shut off the water and turn to see her staring at me.
What?
I…nothing.
What, I ask again
Youre going to stay in here with me right?
I nod my head at this, Yes. Does that bother you?
Bette steps forward into my personal domain and I suck in a breath at the proximity of a very naked Bette Porter.
Not in the least, she speaks in a voice that gets me very wet
Okay, I manage to get out around the lump in my throat
*Bette*
Ill have to admit its kind of fun to get this kind of reaction out of Tina. She is flushed and can barely speak because I am standing so close to her right now. I can tell that she wants me bad.
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(56 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
You are doing a great job I can’t believe you are writing so many great stories at once. We will patiently wait for wherever you decide to go with this. BTW This Bette is adorable and she’s survived some harsh stuff. THanks for this update.
Great pace and flow here. I like the interaction between Bette and Tina here. It’s so much at ease and Bette discovered who she was in the past as she goes on reliving her memories each day. Tina’s reaction to this was great as she never really see this version of Bette before, funny and opened. I’m truly enjoying this story and can’t wait for the therapy session to start. Potential drama and also some fun ahead I feel. So, let’s get it started in here. Oops..that Black Eyed Peas keeps on playing in my head…lol
You are really great and imaginative writer who can handles alot of stories in one go.
You are truly amazing and talented…:)
Rest well and have that brain of yours recharge cos I’m waiting always for something new from you.
multitasking…very good. Please continue each story….i love them all. thanks
this is so original and wonderfully written. I love have you write Bette…so innocent and open.
Aw baby,
Another triumph of a chapter. Seeing Bette so helpless but determined to move on is showing Tina the woman she fell in love with. Having Tina be the strong one is just the topic that Bette needs and wants. This is making her aware of her one true love.
Admire that fact that you are true to the story; Bette’s hands haven’t miraclously healed.
Awaiting you next post on any of your fab stories but this is my fave.
I love the way this story is going and I love the way Bette is so playful and child like. I hope when (if) she gets her memory back that she doesn’t lose that
I love this story! I like how Bette has a young mentality and that the connection between T&B is still there. Can’t wait for the next therapy session to find out what’s going to happen.
post post post soon. lovin the stroy
i agree with everyone………this is wonderful……and i hope to see an update soon……
You are such an amazing writer.I love the connection with bette & Tina PLEASE POST AS SOON AS YOUR BRAIN IS RARING TO GO…..
Love all of your stories, but this is my favorite. Don’t keep us waiting too long!
Okay, I don’t have the words that will do you or your amazing talent justice. You are the best and that still does not describe the awe I have of you. This is my favorite story from you. I was so happy when I logged on and saw it. You make me very happy. I just might email you so we can continue this conversation. Please post this story again soon.Get you some much needed sleep. Good night :-)
I’m really liking BrattyBette. Should be interesting to see how she and T develop as a couple.
Every chapter a treat – thank you for this awesome story.
Great chapter. This new Bette is so cute and funny and adorable, love it. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thank you!
Bette still cute in this chapter. I love it. Get some rest and get those fingers typin! I need more :D
I love the way you have them speaking in the first person, narrating their own story!
Thanks for posting another chapter. I look forward to your next one.
I just went back and read all three of your stories, bringing myself current…and I have to say that each one is unique and well written. They are funny and uplifting…even when you are writing about Bette being shot, and raped…you still bring out the positive. What a great future in writing you have! Thanks!
I just love this story Raba. Bette is so different in this story of yours. Can´t wait for an update – please make it soon.
I’m not reading the other comments because I don’t want mine to be tainted. Simply this: This is FABULOUS. The story is great, the emotions are so well expressed, the dialogue is true and moves, the characters are delightful. RK1, you’re not ceasing to amaze me. Wow. And thanks.
Thank you for this story. It’s very interesting to see relations between B &T in this situation.
You amaze me and your stories are remarkable! I love this Bette, she is so adorable …I hope she doesn’t lose these endearing qualities after she regains more of her memory. Thanks again for all your hard work!
Bette is SOOO cute=) She kinda reminds me of myself…of course less gorgeous, much much shorter, and just a tad bit more goofy:-D I just hope the therapy session goes well. KICK ARSE story, I love it!! Thank you!
Oh how I love this, all the way from Bette’s funniest to Tina’s loving and kindness.