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Bette Forgets 13
Do me, I tell her
Her eyes widen at this and her blush goes from slightly pink to a deep read. Smirking I hold up my hands.
I meant can you put those bags on my hands so I can get in the tub?
She looks from my ***** to my hands and then back up at my face and grins slightly at me after getting her mind out of the very dirty place it had migrated to.
Of course, she whispers
She ties the bags over my hands and I gingerly step into the water. I slowly sink down into the steaming water and sigh in relief holding my hands up in the air.
You like, Tina asks sitting down on the toilet after putting the lid down
Its positively heaven, I answer
I missed this, Tina says while playing with one of the rubber bands that she has in her hands
Watching me take a bath?
She smiles at this, Well yes that but us just hanging out. Before everything got so messed up we always just use tobe with one another. Then are lives got so complicated and we started to drift away from one another.
Is that why I had the affair, I ask her really wanting to know
Tina shrugs at this, Im not really sure on that babe. I think it was a lot of things.
I nod my head at this and sink further into the bathwater. Holding my hands up in the hair I got under the water and then bring myself out again. Tina is watching me with a smile on her face.
Having fun?
Tons, I remark pushing my hair out of my face with my forearm, So tell me about you.
Me, she asks slightly caught off guard by my question
Yes, I dont really know anything about you. I mean I know some things buttell me about you.
She preceded to tell me all about her and what she does and how she is helping children in need and my esteem for her grows exponentially the more the talks. At one point she must see the look in my eyes and she stops mid sentence.
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(56 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
You are doing a great job I can’t believe you are writing so many great stories at once. We will patiently wait for wherever you decide to go with this. BTW This Bette is adorable and she’s survived some harsh stuff. THanks for this update.
Great pace and flow here. I like the interaction between Bette and Tina here. It’s so much at ease and Bette discovered who she was in the past as she goes on reliving her memories each day. Tina’s reaction to this was great as she never really see this version of Bette before, funny and opened. I’m truly enjoying this story and can’t wait for the therapy session to start. Potential drama and also some fun ahead I feel. So, let’s get it started in here. Oops..that Black Eyed Peas keeps on playing in my head…lol
You are really great and imaginative writer who can handles alot of stories in one go.
You are truly amazing and talented…:)
Rest well and have that brain of yours recharge cos I’m waiting always for something new from you.
multitasking…very good. Please continue each story….i love them all. thanks
this is so original and wonderfully written. I love have you write Bette…so innocent and open.
Aw baby,
Another triumph of a chapter. Seeing Bette so helpless but determined to move on is showing Tina the woman she fell in love with. Having Tina be the strong one is just the topic that Bette needs and wants. This is making her aware of her one true love.
Admire that fact that you are true to the story; Bette’s hands haven’t miraclously healed.
Awaiting you next post on any of your fab stories but this is my fave.
I love the way this story is going and I love the way Bette is so playful and child like. I hope when (if) she gets her memory back that she doesn’t lose that
I love this story! I like how Bette has a young mentality and that the connection between T&B is still there. Can’t wait for the next therapy session to find out what’s going to happen.
post post post soon. lovin the stroy
i agree with everyone………this is wonderful……and i hope to see an update soon……
You are such an amazing writer.I love the connection with bette & Tina PLEASE POST AS SOON AS YOUR BRAIN IS RARING TO GO…..
Love all of your stories, but this is my favorite. Don’t keep us waiting too long!
Okay, I don’t have the words that will do you or your amazing talent justice. You are the best and that still does not describe the awe I have of you. This is my favorite story from you. I was so happy when I logged on and saw it. You make me very happy. I just might email you so we can continue this conversation. Please post this story again soon.Get you some much needed sleep. Good night :-)
I’m really liking BrattyBette. Should be interesting to see how she and T develop as a couple.
Every chapter a treat – thank you for this awesome story.
Great chapter. This new Bette is so cute and funny and adorable, love it. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thank you!
Bette still cute in this chapter. I love it. Get some rest and get those fingers typin! I need more :D
I love the way you have them speaking in the first person, narrating their own story!
Thanks for posting another chapter. I look forward to your next one.
I just went back and read all three of your stories, bringing myself current…and I have to say that each one is unique and well written. They are funny and uplifting…even when you are writing about Bette being shot, and raped…you still bring out the positive. What a great future in writing you have! Thanks!
I just love this story Raba. Bette is so different in this story of yours. Can´t wait for an update – please make it soon.
I’m not reading the other comments because I don’t want mine to be tainted. Simply this: This is FABULOUS. The story is great, the emotions are so well expressed, the dialogue is true and moves, the characters are delightful. RK1, you’re not ceasing to amaze me. Wow. And thanks.
Thank you for this story. It’s very interesting to see relations between B &T in this situation.
You amaze me and your stories are remarkable! I love this Bette, she is so adorable …I hope she doesn’t lose these endearing qualities after she regains more of her memory. Thanks again for all your hard work!
Bette is SOOO cute=) She kinda reminds me of myself…of course less gorgeous, much much shorter, and just a tad bit more goofy:-D I just hope the therapy session goes well. KICK ARSE story, I love it!! Thank you!
Oh how I love this, all the way from Bette’s funniest to Tina’s loving and kindness.