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    Bette Forgets 13

    Do me, I tell her

    Her eyes widen at this and her blush goes from slightly pink to a deep read. Smirking I hold up my hands.

    I meant can you put those bags on my hands so I can get in the tub?

    She looks from my ***** to my hands and then back up at my face and grins slightly at me after getting her mind out of the very dirty place it had migrated to.

    Of course, she whispers

    She ties the bags over my hands and I gingerly step into the water. I slowly sink down into the steaming water and sigh in relief holding my hands up in the air.

    You like, Tina asks sitting down on the toilet after putting the lid down

    Its positively heaven, I answer

    I missed this, Tina says while playing with one of the rubber bands that she has in her hands

    Watching me take a bath?

    She smiles at this, Well yes that but us just hanging out. Before everything got so messed up we always just use tobe with one another. Then are lives got so complicated and we started to drift away from one another.

    Is that why I had the affair, I ask her really wanting to know

    Tina shrugs at this, Im not really sure on that babe. I think it was a lot of things.

    I nod my head at this and sink further into the bathwater. Holding my hands up in the hair I got under the water and then bring myself out again. Tina is watching me with a smile on her face.

    Having fun?

    Tons, I remark pushing my hair out of my face with my forearm, So tell me about you.

    Me, she asks slightly caught off guard by my question

    Yes, I dont really know anything about you. I mean I know some things buttell me about you.

    She preceded to tell me all about her and what she does and how she is helping children in need and my esteem for her grows exponentially the more the talks. At one point she must see the look in my eyes and she stops mid sentence.

    Comments

    1. You are doing a great job I can’t believe you are writing so many great stories at once. We will patiently wait for wherever you decide to go with this. BTW This Bette is adorable and she’s survived some harsh stuff. THanks for this update.

    2. Great pace and flow here. I like the interaction between Bette and Tina here. It’s so much at ease and Bette discovered who she was in the past as she goes on reliving her memories each day. Tina’s reaction to this was great as she never really see this version of Bette before, funny and opened. I’m truly enjoying this story and can’t wait for the therapy session to start. Potential drama and also some fun ahead I feel. So, let’s get it started in here. Oops..that Black Eyed Peas keeps on playing in my head…lol

      You are really great and imaginative writer who can handles alot of stories in one go.
      You are truly amazing and talented…:)
      Rest well and have that brain of yours recharge cos I’m waiting always for something new from you.

    3. Aw baby,
      Another triumph of a chapter. Seeing Bette so helpless but determined to move on is showing Tina the woman she fell in love with. Having Tina be the strong one is just the topic that Bette needs and wants. This is making her aware of her one true love.
      Admire that fact that you are true to the story; Bette’s hands haven’t miraclously healed.
      Awaiting you next post on any of your fab stories but this is my fave.

    4. I love the way this story is going and I love the way Bette is so playful and child like. I hope when (if) she gets her memory back that she doesn’t lose that

    5. I love this story! I like how Bette has a young mentality and that the connection between T&B is still there. Can’t wait for the next therapy session to find out what’s going to happen.

    6. Okay, I don’t have the words that will do you or your amazing talent justice. You are the best and that still does not describe the awe I have of you. This is my favorite story from you. I was so happy when I logged on and saw it. You make me very happy. I just might email you so we can continue this conversation. Please post this story again soon.Get you some much needed sleep. Good night :-)

    7. I love the way you have them speaking in the first person, narrating their own story!
      Thanks for posting another chapter. I look forward to your next one.

    8. I just went back and read all three of your stories, bringing myself current…and I have to say that each one is unique and well written. They are funny and uplifting…even when you are writing about Bette being shot, and raped…you still bring out the positive. What a great future in writing you have! Thanks!

    9. I’m not reading the other comments because I don’t want mine to be tainted. Simply this: This is FABULOUS. The story is great, the emotions are so well expressed, the dialogue is true and moves, the characters are delightful. RK1, you’re not ceasing to amaze me. Wow. And thanks.

    10. You amaze me and your stories are remarkable! I love this Bette, she is so adorable …I hope she doesn’t lose these endearing qualities after she regains more of her memory. Thanks again for all your hard work!

    11. Bette is SOOO cute=) She kinda reminds me of myself…of course less gorgeous, much much shorter, and just a tad bit more goofy:-D I just hope the therapy session goes well. KICK ARSE story, I love it!! Thank you!

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