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Bette Forgets 16
*Bette*
*Three months Later*
I am pacing back and forth in the bedroom like a caged animal trying to understand what is going through my head. Its quite simple; I want Tina. Not just a simple make out session but I want her full body and soul, all the way, wet and naked, thrust for thrust…raw animal *****. This really shouldnt be that much of a problem for me but Tina has been so gentle with me, not wanting to push me to far too soon. Its really kind of starting to bug me just a little bit.
I understand where she is coming from, I really do but I am not some porcelain doll she has to treat with care and tenderness. Every time weve kissed its been so sweet and gentle. I love these and gentle kisses but I was something more. I want something hard and erotic.
Except I dont know how to bring this up to Tina.
She and I have been together for a long time, this I know, but I dont remember much of our time together. I do remember a few times when our ***** was…explosive to say the least. I want this, I crave this.
Okay so the first thing I need to do is convince Tina that I am ready for this and the proceed to show her just how ready I really am. Piece of cake really. Getting an idea I smile.
Tina, I call out
I hear her coming down the hall and I turn toward the bedroom door just as she enters.
What is it? Are you alright, she asks with concern
Im fine T.
Then what is it?
I walk closer to her and she must have seen the look in my eyes for she raised an eyebrow.
Youre ready, she remarks softly as she backs up slightly even as I approach
Very ready, I agree, I need for you to take me and take me hard, I say finally getting to her and pressing my body close to hers
Hard, she repeats with a rasp
Hard and deep, I whisper back in my most seductive voice
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(66 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
WOW..SEXY AND HOT CHAPTER LOVED IT PLEASE POST SOON
Wait a minute while I wipe away the steam fogging up my computer screen! WOW!
Great work. Need water, now….
I knew there was a reason I didn’t read this at work. What can I say? OMG, this was f** amazing! So glad you skipped the party. This story just gets better and better. Thanks for bringing on the heat! Going to get the extinguishers now!
I liked that very very much! I love the role reversal you wrote it very convincingly. :)
Was really glad to see an update. Good going. And thanks.
Oh wow I liked that a whole lot!
that was awesome A MOANER WHO KNEW that was great the best kind of party thanks
WHOA very hot
Interesting. Way to take care of your woman, Tina.
I don’t think you’ll have any complaints about skipping the party. Sometimes…lovin is just more important. That was HOTT. Whew. When u need it, you need it…and Bette needed it. Thanks for the post. Loved it like i love them all. Can’t wait for the next one!
OMG! The heat was definitly what was needed. Now…..i’m hot. whew. great job. more soon i hope.
Finally, of couse we like it, this is a hot and wonderful chapter. They are having a hot love scene and a lovely love for both of them. Post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Whew Im SO gald that you skipped the party… We can party someother time LOL… Bette needed it… and She GOT it alright… DAMN that was HOT!!! Heat we need more heat Hehehehe… Great Job!! please post another chapter soon!!!
Loved it
So loved it Reba…goodness…that was so HOTT!!…All that HEAT…whew!!
In the words of Tina…. Nice.. Really, Really nice…. Thanks
*jaw drops* that was.. WOW!! I cant wait for the next chapter :D please continue..
Ok i just realised two posts.. dunno wat happened there… my computer gone crazy i guess
In the words of Tina…. Nice.. Really, Really nice…. Thanks
That was incredible, sweet and hot all at the same time. I love your Bette in this story and thanks for bringing it to us. I don’t know how you keep up.
*Smiles* Excellent chapter!
I liked that Reba, very nice, hot, to say the least, post soon.
Woo who Reba!
That was sweet, sexy, sensuous, sizzling and smoking.
Not the best to read first thing in work as I now need a long cold shower to cool down and focus on the day.
Who cares about the party when you have given us the gift of a great fuck?
Keep on keeping on as this story is wonderful and a fabulous journey for all your fans. I agree that this Bette is extraordinary and hilarious in equal measures. The pain she has gone through and put behind her is astounding and to come out laughing is awesome. Tina has been a marvelous support. I want to see what happens to these charaters next.
Awaiting your next post in anticipation.
A Fan.
One of the hottest love scenes I have ever read. Excellent job.
I don’t know what to say,um, I am glad I skipped the treadmill and decided to read this instead. Whew! Very hot story full of great sex but I also saw the love. You gotta have the love to have all that heat(in my humble opinion). I need to find the strength to move from this chair and go change my pant… You rock Baby! This is also my FAVORITE story of yours, but you know that too. I am so proud of you, I have such a big grin on my face right now. Thank you!! :-)
That was beautiful hot. Nice work Reba. Way to go Porter. Keep your woman happy and she will bee your for the taking. post soon
About time ha ha ha very good.
wow.
Hey Reb that was so Beautiful lovely Hot Story and I like the way Bette say I am not some Porcelain Doll LOL WoW go Bette go thank you Reba Please post soon.
HOT!!!!!!!!
Party, What Party?
Loved it.