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Bette Forgets 16
Do you like that, I hear her whisper in a ragged voice that is driving me insane
More, I respond just as raggedly
I look at her face in time to see her smile and when she inserts another finger within me my legs start to buckle. With her free hand she pushes be up against the door to steady me as she thrusts harder, stronger and faster.
Just what I wanted.
As I feel the sweet pressure building within my loins and spreading outward I feel the need to see my love and all of her. Quickly I unhook her bra and watch as those sweet ***** are revealed to me. I have to stop as my ***** is quickly approaching.
Ah…oh…my…harder.
Tina complies and she is thrusting so hard that I was banging up against the wall hard enough to make the pictures on the wall rattle. As this ***** approaches I realize something, that this is where I belong.
With my love.
I also feel that is going to be the ***** to end all orgasms. I grab at the dresser with one had and Tinas shoulder with the other.
As my body reached the precipice I teetered on the edge for a brief moment and then I fell, hard and with a scream I let it all go. Sometime later, Im not sure how long it took me to come back down to earth I realize that I have my arms wrapped around my wife and that I am shaking.
Tina is rubbing my head and whispering in my ear. As consciousness returns I hear her murmuring words of love and just holding me close.
Im okay, I whisper loosening my hold, I love you so much.
I love you too, Tina murmurs in my hair
I loosen my hold on her to look deep into her eyes and we smile at each other.
That was some ***** you had there, Tina smirks
Shut up, I grin slapping her playfully
I see her eyes darken as she takes in my body.
I think someone is a little overdressed for the occasion, I say starting to remove some of the remaining clothing that Tina is dressed in
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(66 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
WOW..SEXY AND HOT CHAPTER LOVED IT PLEASE POST SOON
Wait a minute while I wipe away the steam fogging up my computer screen! WOW!
Great work. Need water, now….
I knew there was a reason I didn’t read this at work. What can I say? OMG, this was f** amazing! So glad you skipped the party. This story just gets better and better. Thanks for bringing on the heat! Going to get the extinguishers now!
I liked that very very much! I love the role reversal you wrote it very convincingly. :)
Was really glad to see an update. Good going. And thanks.
Oh wow I liked that a whole lot!
that was awesome A MOANER WHO KNEW that was great the best kind of party thanks
WHOA very hot
Interesting. Way to take care of your woman, Tina.
I don’t think you’ll have any complaints about skipping the party. Sometimes…lovin is just more important. That was HOTT. Whew. When u need it, you need it…and Bette needed it. Thanks for the post. Loved it like i love them all. Can’t wait for the next one!
OMG! The heat was definitly what was needed. Now…..i’m hot. whew. great job. more soon i hope.
Finally, of couse we like it, this is a hot and wonderful chapter. They are having a hot love scene and a lovely love for both of them. Post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Whew Im SO gald that you skipped the party… We can party someother time LOL… Bette needed it… and She GOT it alright… DAMN that was HOT!!! Heat we need more heat Hehehehe… Great Job!! please post another chapter soon!!!
Loved it
So loved it Reba…goodness…that was so HOTT!!…All that HEAT…whew!!
In the words of Tina…. Nice.. Really, Really nice…. Thanks
*jaw drops* that was.. WOW!! I cant wait for the next chapter :D please continue..
Ok i just realised two posts.. dunno wat happened there… my computer gone crazy i guess
In the words of Tina…. Nice.. Really, Really nice…. Thanks
That was incredible, sweet and hot all at the same time. I love your Bette in this story and thanks for bringing it to us. I don’t know how you keep up.
*Smiles* Excellent chapter!
I liked that Reba, very nice, hot, to say the least, post soon.
Woo who Reba!
That was sweet, sexy, sensuous, sizzling and smoking.
Not the best to read first thing in work as I now need a long cold shower to cool down and focus on the day.
Who cares about the party when you have given us the gift of a great fuck?
Keep on keeping on as this story is wonderful and a fabulous journey for all your fans. I agree that this Bette is extraordinary and hilarious in equal measures. The pain she has gone through and put behind her is astounding and to come out laughing is awesome. Tina has been a marvelous support. I want to see what happens to these charaters next.
Awaiting your next post in anticipation.
A Fan.
One of the hottest love scenes I have ever read. Excellent job.
I don’t know what to say,um, I am glad I skipped the treadmill and decided to read this instead. Whew! Very hot story full of great sex but I also saw the love. You gotta have the love to have all that heat(in my humble opinion). I need to find the strength to move from this chair and go change my pant… You rock Baby! This is also my FAVORITE story of yours, but you know that too. I am so proud of you, I have such a big grin on my face right now. Thank you!! :-)
That was beautiful hot. Nice work Reba. Way to go Porter. Keep your woman happy and she will bee your for the taking. post soon
About time ha ha ha very good.
wow.
Hey Reb that was so Beautiful lovely Hot Story and I like the way Bette say I am not some Porcelain Doll LOL WoW go Bette go thank you Reba Please post soon.
HOT!!!!!!!!
Party, What Party?
Loved it.