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Bette Forgets 19
Bette makes a big show of thinking about that and then, Youre psychic?
Yes, thats it, I say completely deadpan
She laughs at this, So miss Helena Peabody Jr what do you want to teach me today?
I just shake my head at the Jr. part and get to my feet, You are going to be teaching me today, I say giving her a bright smile
Me, she says startled, What do I know that I can teach you?
Dont underestimate yourself Bette. You know a lot more than you think you do.
She cocked her head to the side as she gazed at me and I was slightly caught of guard by the intensity of her look.
What, I ask after a prolonged silence
She smiles at me, Nothing.
That look wasnt nothing.
Bette shrugs her shoulders, You just are so much different then what people say you are is all.
I smirked at this, What do people say about me?
You dont want to know.
Probably not on second thought.
So is this thing that Im teaching you like a written test or what?
I come around my desk and the two of us go out into the gallery, Oral.
Ooh I like orals.
Im bet you do, I chuckle
*Bette*
After a rather enlightening afternoon of work I head to my therapists office for my weekly appointment. I am still going even though I havent been having to many flashbacks of the attack or even memories. Most of my memories seem to be gone for good it would seem. Im currently waiting in the waiting room talking with Tina on the phone.
How was your day babe, Tina asks me
It was very strange, I say with a smile
How do you mean strange?
Helena had me teach her everything that I remembered about art.
That sounds fun.
I know Tina is being rather sarcastic but I answer anyway with, It was.
I hear her sweet laughter over my cell phone, Im glad you enjoyed it. Are you waiting for Shelly now?
Yes, I was a little early and decided to call my love and see her day has been going.
Your love appreciates the call, says Tina
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(64 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Ok, it’s probably just me – but I like your story because of the story and character development moreso than the sex stuff. Once you go down that path, your story starts to resemble many others on the site. So, don’t forget to keep going with a strong story.
I agree with you Jean, the female viagra angle is kind of weird. I would think Tina would be the one who needs the release. Maybe she cums from getting her lover to cum. Anyway, I love this story, viagra aside, I can’t wait for the next installment. It’s your story rebakathy so I won’t be too judgemental. Any sex scene with Tina and Bette is hot!
Well…I guess I am a dissenting opinion. I’m not just saying this because I’m biased towards your writing. But I actually like the diversion of the viagra thing. It’s just like Alice to mess this up and gives us a brief respite from the drama. I don’t think you veering from your character development at all. We get to see the fun-loving 22-year old minded Bette Porter and the connection she still has with Tina even though she can’t remember their past. I think it is important to remember to keep up the development of the characters against the backdrop of their intimacy. I trust you as a writer and think you will keep the balance going.
That said, and this isn’t directed at anyone, it is sometimes difficult as an author because no matter what you do, someone wants something else. If you are working on character development…someone is screaming for hot bnt lovin’…if you have hot bnt lovin’ someone is screaming for character development. I guess in the end, you just have to write your story as you envision it and hope that others will see where you are going and enjoy your offering.
In any event, you know I’m along for whatever ride you take us on. Thanks for sharing you Writing Machine you. =)
LMAO!! You never cease to amaze me Reba!
““This is the phone of Bette Porter,†says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.†“
That up there is a knee slapper!! And female viagra…you just think of everything! The love scene in the end was HOT!! More please, can’t wait for the next chapter…NC-17…woo-hoo!!
You are a Genius! This story is amaaazing, I really love the way you write.
I am eager to see where you will take us, damn excellent work reba! keep up the good work!
THIS IS AWESOME……WOW……I REMEMBER HAVING ONE OF THOSE RIDES HOME ONE NIGHT….SHE SHE SHE…..IT WAS THE MOST AWESOME SEX I HAVE EVER HAD…..WOW….
I agree with MTS on the character development. It is what set your story apart from others. I did laugh at the female viagra. And, hmmm, I really like the sweet and thoughtful phone conversations between Bette and Tina. It reminds me of when I was at the beach. See, I had some fun phone conversations with a friend while I was there. I really looked forward to those phone calls. :-)
Dont know how female viagra works either but im pretty sure you shouldnt be driving lol great tho
Just got caught up again. Love this story. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks!
GREAT CHAPTER…ALICE IS A CRAZY LADY.BETTE & TINA WERE HOT AS USUAL..PLEASE POST SOON
This is so fucking hot and funny. Oh man Alice is crazy and funny. Ok back to Bette and Tina, post soon. Thank you! Great chapter!
Pretty sure noboby cares, as long as HOT sex scenes are involved. Good Job.
lol! (but I feel compelled to mention that that’s not safe driving — for the baby’s sake.)
i don’t care if you got it right or wrong either, it was great and funny and hot, more please
Sooooo ready for the next chapter:))))
Whew OK i’m trying to come back to earth. Thanks for the long chapter. I can never get enough.
Well well well I’m told a good writer does some background research before writing a story, I wouldn’t be able to tell any different though! Great chapter, can’t wait till the next.
OMG…what the hell are you doing to us. This was pretty HOT and so FUNNY. I can´t stop laughing. I think we all need to try this out…what so you say. Post soon
great story, you really have a knack for writing..keep it up, I enjoy all your stories!
haha that was comedy n hot 2..dont stop
“This is the phone of Bette Porter,†says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.â€
Best line.Very hot chapter btw, can’t wait for the next one. I know what lies ahead, hell yes. One of the privilages of being engaged to such a fantabulous writer haha.
I don’t care if you got it wrong or not…this is soooo HOT! Next chapter please….Hurry!
DAMN that was HOT!!! WHOOOHOOOO! lol.. hahah Alice is crazy… but thank god for her right now!.. great job! post soon
i don’t either, but if it works like that… sign me up!!!
The night will be long… I love this Bette, I love this story.
I liked it, it was hot and funny. Post soon please :)
wow that was a good one
every fan fiction writer makes Alice so funny. I love it. And Tina wow