Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 9, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Bette Forgets 19

    You had fun at work? In our last meeting you said that work had been troubling for you. What changed in a weeks time?

    Now that was a good question.

    Ive gotten more used to everything, I say, Ive gotten more used to art and Helena and just things. Ive also remembered a few seemingly insignificant snippets of information that pertained to my job but have proven useful.

    How is the relationship with Ms. Peabody going?

    I smile to this, We are getting along really well. I wasnt sure I was going to like her you know, because Id heard things about her. I didnt let ***** like that interfere with my opinion when I was actually twenty two and arent going to let it now. Shes really a great person.

    Are you attracted to her?

    I scowl at this. She and I have often talked about what we thought made me go for Candace, even though I dont remember it. She often asks me if I find myself attracted to people that I meet. Its starting to annoy. I sigh heavily at this.

    No, I state sharply, You are supposed to be helping me you know. Not asking me if Im attracted to every woman that I ever meet!

    My psychiatrist does something that catches me completely off guard; she smiles.

    I was wondering how long it would take you before you said something to me.

    I have to admit that my mouth was hanging open at this admission from the good doctor. What kind of doctor was this anyway.

    What kind of Doctor are you, I ask echoing my own thought

    An experimental one.

    What the ***** does that mean?

    Just what it says. I try projects on my patients to see what happens.

    Isnt that like against the law or something to experiment on your patients?

    Bette how long have I been asking you if you are attracted to the woman you meet?

    I think, About a month.

    And what has your response been?

    Of course Im not.

    What do you think the old Bette would have said to me.

    How the ***** should I know?

    Think about it.

    Comments

    1. Ok, it’s probably just me – but I like your story because of the story and character development moreso than the sex stuff. Once you go down that path, your story starts to resemble many others on the site. So, don’t forget to keep going with a strong story.

    2. I agree with you Jean, the female viagra angle is kind of weird. I would think Tina would be the one who needs the release. Maybe she cums from getting her lover to cum. Anyway, I love this story, viagra aside, I can’t wait for the next installment. It’s your story rebakathy so I won’t be too judgemental. Any sex scene with Tina and Bette is hot!

    3. Well…I guess I am a dissenting opinion. I’m not just saying this because I’m biased towards your writing. But I actually like the diversion of the viagra thing. It’s just like Alice to mess this up and gives us a brief respite from the drama. I don’t think you veering from your character development at all. We get to see the fun-loving 22-year old minded Bette Porter and the connection she still has with Tina even though she can’t remember their past. I think it is important to remember to keep up the development of the characters against the backdrop of their intimacy. I trust you as a writer and think you will keep the balance going.

      That said, and this isn’t directed at anyone, it is sometimes difficult as an author because no matter what you do, someone wants something else. If you are working on character development…someone is screaming for hot bnt lovin’…if you have hot bnt lovin’ someone is screaming for character development. I guess in the end, you just have to write your story as you envision it and hope that others will see where you are going and enjoy your offering.

      In any event, you know I’m along for whatever ride you take us on. Thanks for sharing you Writing Machine you. =)

    4. LMAO!! You never cease to amaze me Reba!

      ““This is the phone of Bette Porter,” says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.” “

      That up there is a knee slapper!! And female viagra…you just think of everything! The love scene in the end was HOT!! More please, can’t wait for the next chapter…NC-17…woo-hoo!!

    5. You are a Genius! This story is amaaazing, I really love the way you write.
      I am eager to see where you will take us, damn excellent work reba! keep up the good work!

    6. THIS IS AWESOME……WOW……I REMEMBER HAVING ONE OF THOSE RIDES HOME ONE NIGHT….SHE SHE SHE…..IT WAS THE MOST AWESOME SEX I HAVE EVER HAD…..WOW….

    7. I agree with MTS on the character development. It is what set your story apart from others. I did laugh at the female viagra. And, hmmm, I really like the sweet and thoughtful phone conversations between Bette and Tina. It reminds me of when I was at the beach. See, I had some fun phone conversations with a friend while I was there. I really looked forward to those phone calls. :-)

    8. Well well well I’m told a good writer does some background research before writing a story, I wouldn’t be able to tell any different though! Great chapter, can’t wait till the next.

    9. OMG…what the hell are you doing to us. This was pretty HOT and so FUNNY. I can´t stop laughing. I think we all need to try this out…what so you say. Post soon

    10. “This is the phone of Bette Porter,” says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.”

      Best line.Very hot chapter btw, can’t wait for the next one. I know what lies ahead, hell yes. One of the privilages of being engaged to such a fantabulous writer haha.

    Leave a Reply