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    Bette Forgets 19

    Story written on May 12, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53824
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    Helena is nice, Shelly is evil and we have sex, woo!

    I sigh and really think about this. What would the Bette of old have said, She would have told you to go ***** yourself, I say after a moment

    Yes, and she wouldnt have told me what she felt. You did.

    I frowned at this. That was a covert way of getting the truth out of someone if I ever heard one.

    Okay fine, I stated, Just dont do it again.

    She held up her hand, You have my word.

    Good.

    Has anything out of the ordinary happened since our last visit?

    I raised an eyebrow at this.

    Other than the thing with me.

    Smiling I say, I visited Gracy in prison yesterday?

    She raises an eyebrow at this, Why would you do that? I thought the last visit you had with him was the last one?

    I thought so too, but yesterday Ben called me up saying that Gracy had requested to see me. I admit I was really curious and so I went. Of course Ben went with me. He wouldnt have stayed home even if I told him too.

    Yes, hes very protective of you.

    And no Im not attracted to him either.

    She smiles at this, What did he want?

    He wanted to tell me goodbye.

    Shelly ***** her head to the side, I thought hed already done that.

    Not goodbye as in we wont see each other again. I mean goodbye as in Im leaving this good earth.

    Hes dying, she gathered

    And he was given up.

    What did you say?

    I told him that if he gave up like this it wouldnt be making up for what he did to me. That he would be giving up altogether.

    What was his reaction?

    Shock.

    Shock?

    Me calling him by his first name probably had something to with it?

    Why would you do that?

    The shock factor. I convinced him to live.

    How do you feel about that?

    I always have to smile at the how do you feel about that question. Its so stereotypical of psychiatrists. I shrug my shoulders to this.

    Kind of indifferent to the whole thing actually. I feel for the guy and dont want him to die but thats the end of my feelings where he is concerned.

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    1. Ok, it’s probably just me – but I like your story because of the story and character development moreso than the sex stuff. Once you go down that path, your story starts to resemble many others on the site. So, don’t forget to keep going with a strong story.

    2. I agree with you Jean, the female viagra angle is kind of weird. I would think Tina would be the one who needs the release. Maybe she cums from getting her lover to cum. Anyway, I love this story, viagra aside, I can’t wait for the next installment. It’s your story rebakathy so I won’t be too judgemental. Any sex scene with Tina and Bette is hot!

    3. Well…I guess I am a dissenting opinion. I’m not just saying this because I’m biased towards your writing. But I actually like the diversion of the viagra thing. It’s just like Alice to mess this up and gives us a brief respite from the drama. I don’t think you veering from your character development at all. We get to see the fun-loving 22-year old minded Bette Porter and the connection she still has with Tina even though she can’t remember their past. I think it is important to remember to keep up the development of the characters against the backdrop of their intimacy. I trust you as a writer and think you will keep the balance going.

      That said, and this isn’t directed at anyone, it is sometimes difficult as an author because no matter what you do, someone wants something else. If you are working on character development…someone is screaming for hot bnt lovin’…if you have hot bnt lovin’ someone is screaming for character development. I guess in the end, you just have to write your story as you envision it and hope that others will see where you are going and enjoy your offering.

      In any event, you know I’m along for whatever ride you take us on. Thanks for sharing you Writing Machine you. =)

    4. LMAO!! You never cease to amaze me Reba!

      ““This is the phone of Bette Porter,” says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.” “

      That up there is a knee slapper!! And female viagra…you just think of everything! The love scene in the end was HOT!! More please, can’t wait for the next chapter…NC-17…woo-hoo!!

    5. You are a Genius! This story is amaaazing, I really love the way you write.
      I am eager to see where you will take us, damn excellent work reba! keep up the good work!

    6. THIS IS AWESOME……WOW……I REMEMBER HAVING ONE OF THOSE RIDES HOME ONE NIGHT….SHE SHE SHE…..IT WAS THE MOST AWESOME SEX I HAVE EVER HAD…..WOW….

    7. I agree with MTS on the character development. It is what set your story apart from others. I did laugh at the female viagra. And, hmmm, I really like the sweet and thoughtful phone conversations between Bette and Tina. It reminds me of when I was at the beach. See, I had some fun phone conversations with a friend while I was there. I really looked forward to those phone calls. :-)

    17. Well well well I’m told a good writer does some background research before writing a story, I wouldn’t be able to tell any different though! Great chapter, can’t wait till the next.

    18. OMG…what the hell are you doing to us. This was pretty HOT and so FUNNY. I can´t stop laughing. I think we all need to try this out…what so you say. Post soon

    21. “This is the phone of Bette Porter,” says Bette in her imitation of her voicemail, “My shrink deemed me psycho and has institutionalized me. Don’t know when I get out. I’ll try to get back to you. Beep.”

      Best line.Very hot chapter btw, can’t wait for the next one. I know what lies ahead, hell yes. One of the privilages of being engaged to such a fantabulous writer haha.

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