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Bette Forgets 20
I still plan on taking you out of this town of ours. Your little plan doesnt sound like much fun for me.
Bette shrugs at this, Youll burn of some energy and get that luscious body of yours into even better shape, she states running a finger across my collar bone causing me to shiver
Okay, I manage swallowing, Let me take that cold shower first.
Im going to join you in this shower but we are only going to shower, she stated pointing a finger at me, Shower.
Yes maam.
After we take a cold shower where I have to restrain myself from jumping Bette we both get dressed and head to the gym. True to her word Bette just sits and watches me burn off the residual sexual energy that has been afflicted upon me. Its around nine oclock by the time that we get home. Bette goes in the bedroom to pack while I water the plants around the house.
At hearing a knock at the door I furrow my brows at who that could be that late at night.
Ill get it, I shout
K, I here Bette shout back
Going over to the door I open it to reveal a woman standing on our doorstep. She looks very familiar to me but I cant quite figure out where I know her from.
May I help you, I ask
Yes, Im sorry for coming so late but when you get the courage for something you must go.
That was certainly and odd statement.
Im here to see Bette Porter, this woman states
Oh sure, Bette, I call turning me head
Bette comes down the hall as quickly as possible and saddles up next to me peering around the door at the woman standing on the doorstep. Her reaction to this person is interesting. She pales slightly and her eyes widen in surprise.
Will you excuse me for a moment, Bette says to the woman shutting the door in this womans face
Babe whats going on? Who is that?
Bette turns to me and it looks like shes shocked beyond all measure, Do you know who that is?
I shook my head, Thus the question?
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(53 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Wow, really really surprising chapter. I love it, do continue.
<3
Wow, that was a very interesting chapter. I loved it.
Beautiful, touching, deep, I LOVED IT!! Looking forward to your next post.
Interesting turn of events.
Good stuff!
Well, THIS is a new development! Can’t wait to see where you go with this.
AHHHH……YOU ARE GOOD….AND THIS IS WONDERFUL…I LOVE IT…SEX IN THE CAR…MEETING BETTE’S MOTHER…OH WOW……I WISH ILENE CHAIKEN WOULD COME TO THIS SITE FOR IDEAS ON BETTE AND TINA STORIES….WOWOWOWOWOW….
That was really intense-incredible-fantastic!!! Thanks…you’re so good at this!
Damn this is so incredible and excellent chapter. Wow what a surprise meeting and a surprise happy too, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Very interesting indeed! Incredible chapter. Loved it. Love your writing!
This has been one of my fav. stories to read.. it just keeps getting better and better… I get giddy when I see you have posted.. thanks… more please:)
Bette’s mom is alive huh! Maybe now (with some memory gained) she’ll be able to confront her prior trust, relationship issues and inability to share her innermost feelings.
Beautiful chapter.I loved it.please post soon
WOW…what a chapter!! LOVED IT!! Bette’s dad sucks, I can’t believe he did that to Bette’s mom…omg, I wonder what missing from Bette’s memories, you know, from the time she confronted her father to the time she celebrated her 16th birthday…I get the feeling that it’s something bad! Loved it REBA!! Update soon please!
OK where is the next chapter. * days I’ve been waiting. :( Pwease….
Fuck me her mother. I’m speachless;-)
Her mom that was a twist, anyways melvin is eviler then I though. He like a guy off a soap opera. Anyways I want to hear more about the dreams, and though bette has been having.
Very interesting twist from the twisted author herself! Thanks for the update!!!
Great! I really like your story…please continue!
Reba…that was so beautiful and touching. Keep up the great work. Post soon
So far I like this series. Please don’t keep us waiting long!
Reba…your mind is just way too creative. I can’t believe her mother was locked up like that. I also find Bette’s character interesting because she seems to have had a lack of maternal influence in her life. This would help explain why. Are they still going on the trip?