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Bette Forgets 20
Thats my mother.
Her mother.
Your dead mother, I ask not grasping this concept
Thus the surprise.
Ah. Well maybe we shouldnt keep the ghost lady on the doorstep then.
Bette scratches the side of her neck and frowns. This is the cutest expression. She gives it when she doesnt particularly want to do something but knows that she has to.
Okay but if I pass out its your fault because you made me let her in.
I roll my eyes at this, Open the door already.
Bette takes in a deep breath and opens the door revealing that the woman was still standing on the doorstep.
Please come in, please, Bette stated ushering her mother or whoever into the house
*Bette*
Good lord this is certainly a surreal experience. The woman sitting to my right is supposed to be dead. At least thats what Ive always been led to believe. We sit in silence for a few minutes just staring at one another.
Youre my mother, I finally state getting tired of the silence
She jumps slightly at hearing my voice, Yes.
Julia Porter, I state
Yes.
I nod my head to this, You are supposed to be dead.
She sucks in a breath at this, Well the rumors of my demise have been greatly exaggerated.
Obviously, I state, Why are you here? After all this time?
I just got out of…
Dont tell me youve been in prison?
Worse.
Whats worse than prison, Tina asks speaking for the first time
My mother turns her attention to Tina.
Uh…mom…I guess this is my wife Tina, T, my supposedly dead but really not mother Julia Porter.
Julia raises an eyebrow as she and Tina smile at one another.
Whats worse than prison, I ask repeating Tinas question
I was locked up in a mental institution.
Well that doesnt sound very good.
Mental institution, I repeat, Why?
My mother, weird, looks down at her hands, I do not wish to speak ill of the dead and if I went through the entire explanation I would be doing that. Suffice it to say it was involuntary on my part.
It is my turn to suck in a breath. I was right. The strange and freaky memory that I had about my parents was right.
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(53 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Wow, really really surprising chapter. I love it, do continue.
<3
Wow, that was a very interesting chapter. I loved it.
Beautiful, touching, deep, I LOVED IT!! Looking forward to your next post.
Interesting turn of events.
Good stuff!
Well, THIS is a new development! Can’t wait to see where you go with this.
AHHHH……YOU ARE GOOD….AND THIS IS WONDERFUL…I LOVE IT…SEX IN THE CAR…MEETING BETTE’S MOTHER…OH WOW……I WISH ILENE CHAIKEN WOULD COME TO THIS SITE FOR IDEAS ON BETTE AND TINA STORIES….WOWOWOWOWOW….
That was really intense-incredible-fantastic!!! Thanks…you’re so good at this!
Damn this is so incredible and excellent chapter. Wow what a surprise meeting and a surprise happy too, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Very interesting indeed! Incredible chapter. Loved it. Love your writing!
This has been one of my fav. stories to read.. it just keeps getting better and better… I get giddy when I see you have posted.. thanks… more please:)
Bette’s mom is alive huh! Maybe now (with some memory gained) she’ll be able to confront her prior trust, relationship issues and inability to share her innermost feelings.
Beautiful chapter.I loved it.please post soon
WOW…what a chapter!! LOVED IT!! Bette’s dad sucks, I can’t believe he did that to Bette’s mom…omg, I wonder what missing from Bette’s memories, you know, from the time she confronted her father to the time she celebrated her 16th birthday…I get the feeling that it’s something bad! Loved it REBA!! Update soon please!
OK where is the next chapter. * days I’ve been waiting. :( Pwease….
Fuck me her mother. I’m speachless;-)
Her mom that was a twist, anyways melvin is eviler then I though. He like a guy off a soap opera. Anyways I want to hear more about the dreams, and though bette has been having.
Very interesting twist from the twisted author herself! Thanks for the update!!!
Great! I really like your story…please continue!
Reba…that was so beautiful and touching. Keep up the great work. Post soon
So far I like this series. Please don’t keep us waiting long!
Reba…your mind is just way too creative. I can’t believe her mother was locked up like that. I also find Bette’s character interesting because she seems to have had a lack of maternal influence in her life. This would help explain why. Are they still going on the trip?