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Bette Forgets 39
“Sounds good babe,” I say getting to a closed door
“Youre not mad that I didnt tell you?”
I turn to Bette at this, “Not mad.”
I reach for the doorknob and Bette places her hand over mine. She turns me around and hugs me tightly.
“What is it,” I ask her
“I just love you so much,” she says as tears are coming to her eyes, “Im sorry. Im just a little emotional right now.”
I pull back and take her face into my hands, “Its okay babe. I love you too.”
Bette smiles brightly at me and turns me back around opening the door in the process. I gasp at what I see. The master bedroom is positively huge with a kind sized canopy bed taking center stage. There are candles dotted throughout the room creating a shadow affect. I hear the door close and see Bette leaning against the door holding out a white rose to me.
I slowly make my way over to her and take the rose. I set in on the dresser next to the door and take Bette into my arms and kiss her as passionately as I can. I try to convey all of my love, hopes and dreams in this one kiss.
*Bette*
After Tina and I have to come up for air I cant really think straight from the power of that kiss. I feel Tinas hands on me, undressing me. She unbuttons my shirt and slides it off my shoulders. She cups my ***** in her hands and smiles. Leaning forward she runs her tongue from my cleavage to the spot just below my ear that she knows drives me wild. Tina lifts the hem of my shirt and pulls it over my head tossing it to the floor. She grins when she sees that Im not wearing a bra.
She looks up at me and I gulp from the look in her eyes right now. I had wanted to take this night slow and passionately but I think I teased my love a little too much today and she needs it now. Hard and fast. I nod my head ever so slightly and I hear Tina moan. She frantically works at the zipper of my slacks and I have to still her hands for a moment. I push down the zipper and my pants drop to the ground and I step out of them standing before Tina very much naked.
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(51 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
Damm what a way to start the morning. great update, why can’t I have a house like that??
I soo love Bette :) WOW great chapter..simply the best! Post soon!.
Reba…just read your last 10 chapters of your 4 wonderful stories. And this one to finish up with. Great work and do keep posting.
Excellente!!! You are a great writer.
omigawd that was good. cold shower coming up, nam’sayin?
Hey, I have been following your 4 stories, but am just getting the time to comment. You are a really great writer. I eagerly await each posting. I have been checking all day to see the next chapter of “eyes of the Beholder”. Can’t wait.
Ahhhhhhhhhh…..Nice contended sigh. That was a wonderful chapter. So loving and romantic. Bette really outdid herself this time. Thanks for sharing such a heart-warming chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. =)
oh wow…….this is wonderful…..absolutely excellent…..
Haven’t been able to comment in a while. But let me tell you what a wonderful job you have done with this story on all the other ones. Loving them!!
Love the chapter… love the story. Amazing how 2 words as simple as “come here” can convey so much. Can’t wait to see where you take us from here!
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY…………..
Wow beautiful and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
I agree the come here says it all. Beautiful chapter.
Rebakathy I am in awe at the beauty of your discriptions. Such warm tender love and yes the come here says it all thanks
Morning.. Yes i’m up early. Wahhoo.. What a great suprise for Tina. That was simply Awesome. I can’t wait for more. That was truly the best way to go to sleep last night reading it. Where ya taking me next? Ok so B&T will be there but hey I’m game. LOL..
Hey kiddo, that compliment was really sweet. brilliance of it. I’m not sure about that but thank you for having faith in me. OK so I’m shy. Thanks you deeply for the compliment. (blushing) later Twin
REBA… that was beautiful… and i also love this story…and the COME HERE…oh yeah… beautiful simply beautiful
Wonderful chapter, so sweet and loving. thank you………more soon please.
Very nice chapter .. Really enjoying your story.
And once again I’m off to a cold shower! Thank you for another great chapter.
Beautifully written and you conveyed their emotions perfectly. Damn, where is that house, I want it!
great chapter i´m off to shower now..lol..post soon please
I don’t know how you manage to do it…write so many different storylines at the same time. You would think that by having so much on your plate, that one of the stories would suffer…but that is totally not the case. They are all fabulous…all fresh…all equally as inticing. Your talent is such a treat to be a part of. Thank you for sharing so much with us.
K
Wonderful chapter. They are so loving and sweet, I just can’t get enough. Can’t wait for more, LOVE this.
hey there- still catching up on your story but wanted to let you know how much i am enjoying it, and of course this chapter as well!