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Bette Forgets 59
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“I’m sorry,” she repeated softly, “Tell everyone that I’m sorry.”
“Carmen.”
She had closed her eyes.
“Carmen!”
I felt for her pulse in her neck as I bring my head over her mouth to hear for breathing. There is neither.
“No!”
I know I’m not going to be able to bring her back from the placement of the stake coming out of her chest.
“I forgive you,” I whisper bringing my head down against hers, “I forgive you.”
Reaching my shaking hand in Carmen’s pants pocket I pull out a key and get up only to fall back down, as my legs are too shaky to carry me. I attempt to get up again and make my way through the house and throw open the door to the basement. I race down those stairs in an attempt to make my way as quickly as possible down the stairs.
Tina
I listen to al of the noise above me and my blood runs cold when I hear what sounds like a gunshot. Then I hear things hitting the floor and then silence. The silence is killing me. After a moment I hear the door open and someone coming haphazardly down the stairs.
“TTina.”
Oh my god.
“Bette!”
The blindfold is lifted from my eyes.
“Keep your eyes closed for a minute T,” Bette speaks and it sounds like she’s crying, “Slowly open your eyes.”
I do as my beloved asks as I feel her reach for the manacles keeping my hands prisoner. She is definitely crying as I hear her sniffling.
I slowly open my eyes and get used to have my eyes open and the light, however dim, that is in the room. As my eyes fall on my love I am shocked by what I see. Her face is bleeding and her hair is in a disarray as is her clothing. Bette’s eyes are red and bloodshot.
“What happened,” I ask her
Bette sniffles and smiles weakly as she gets the manacles unlocked. Before my hands could drop down Bette grabs them and brings them gently into my lap.
“Dead weights,” Bette whispers
I nod my head, “What happened,” I ask again
Bette looks at me in the eyes, “I love you.”
“I love you too.”
I know that this, whatever happened is hard for Bette to live with.
“Bette.”
“I killed Carmen,” Bette says so softly I almost don’t hear her
“What?”
“We were fighting and sheI didn’t mean to.”
“Bette look at me.”
Bette looked up into my eyes, “I know you didn’t mean to. You would never do something like that.”
“She attacked me Tina. I didn’t want it to end like this.”
“I know Bette. Can we get out of here?”
Bette nods as she unties my feet with shaky hands, “Lets get out of here.”
TBC…Hope it wasn’t too traumatic. Here’s to chapter 60!
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why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on