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Bette
As the gun goes off I feel the rush of air go past my head but don’t take time to think about it as I elbow Carmen across the side of the face making her stumble back a few paces. I toss the gun out the window and turn to Carmen as she lunges at me. She gets a crack in my gut and as I double over I feel her hit the back of my head.
I don’t think so.
As I drop to my knees I yank up on one of Carmen’s legs sending her to the floor with a thud and bring both hands, interlocked, down in the center of her chest, knocking the air out of her lungs. She punches me in the shoulder with the heel of her hands. I fall backward. Getting to her feet she comes at me and placing both feet in her sternum I flip her over my head. Quickly I role to my feet and turn in horror to what I had done.
This house has been condemned for a while now and there is wood and trash littering the floor. When Carmen hit the ground she landed on one such piece of wood that had been sticking up out of the floor. It was sticking up out of her chest.
“No.”
I drop to my knees beside Carmen.
“Carmen!”
She opens her eyes.
“I really did love Shane you know.”
“I know you did. Stay with me. The police should be here soon. They are probably bringing an ambulance too.”
Carmen coughed and I watched as a little bit of blood trickling out of the corner of her mouth.
“I’m sorry,” I repeat taking her hand, “I’m sorry. I didn’t want it to end like this.”
Carmen takes in a ragged breath, “I didn’t want it to end like this either. I’m sorry Bette.”
“It’s okay. Try not to talk. You need to save your strength.”
She shakes her head, “I don’t know where it all wentso wrong.”
I was rubbing her hair and couldn’t help the tears that made their way down my cheeks, “I don’t know either.”
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why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on