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Bette Forgets 59
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“No,” I state indignantly, “Give me some credit.”
“You’ve been stalking me and kidnapped my wife. Credit ran out a while ago.”
I swallow at this.
“You can end this all Carmen.”
“Stop saying my name!”
“You can end this all Carmen,” Bette says again without missing a beat, “You can end this all now.”
“You’d let me walk away?”
“Yes.”
“I don’t believe you.”
Bette smiles at this, “I’m a very giving person Carmen. You walk away now, right now, never come back and we can call it a day.”
I frown at this. Could I really walk away? Could I spend the rest of my life without looking at the glorious beauty standing in front of me? Could I go the rest of my life without knowing the full truth?
“Or I can call the police and have them here to arrest you for stalking, kidnapping and I’m sure there are some other charges in there. I have an in with the police. I could probably get them to make up some charges.”
Prison.
“You’re far to pretty for prison Carmen. You’d be made someone’s ***** for sure,” Bette smiles, “Perhaps that is a good reason to call in the cavalry.”
I narrow my eyes in anger at this, “Shut up!”
Bette smiles at this, “Didn’t like that suggestion did you? Your only option is to turn tail and run.”
I squared my shoulders and made my stance a little stronger, “I’m not leaving.”
“Then we have a problem then don’t we? I am not leaving this house without my wife.”
“I can’t let you leave this house with your wife.”
I watched as Bette’s finger went back to the trigger, “Do it.”
“You would like that wouldn’t you? It would be a quick end to this whole thing. I’m not going to do it Carmen. I won’t give you that easy way out.”
“Then we certainly do have a problem.”
We were both distracted when we heard rattling of chains coming from the basement and muffled yelling. I took this as much chance and lunged at the Bette. I grabbed at the gun in her hands and we struggled for it. We both stopped what we were doing when the gun went off.
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why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on