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I pulled out a cream colored card which had a pair of white flowers printed in the middle of it, and a letter.
I opened up the card first and as I read what was inside, I dropped the card to the ground, gasping with my eyes widened.
Dear Helena and Guest,
You are cordially invited to attend the Commitment Ceremony of
Bette Porter & Tina Kennard.
Commitment Ceremony? As in, Bette was getting married to Tina?
The words stung my eyes as I looked on the floor at the card again. The names and the words were stinging my eyes, glaring up at me.
I felt the panic rising in my system.
There had to be some rational explanation for this.
There had to be.
Why, she hadn’t even told me about it.
I carelessly wiped the tears that were falling from my eyes and picked up the folded letter, desperate to hear her words.
Dearest Helena,
I can’t imagine how big a shock you must be having right now. I know this seems very sudden; it all happened so fast that I didn’t even have the time to talk to you about it. I know how you feel towards Tina and we’ve never really broached the subject in our emails.
Tina proposed to me over dinner last week. I was so overwhelmed by her gesture and love that I said yes. We’ve had our ups and downs, but I do love her.
I really hope that you will be by my side when I take those vows with her, Helena. You’re my best friend and nothing in the world would mean more to me than having you there.
You will always have a place in my heart.
Love, Bette.
I shook my head in disbelief.
No, I wanted to scream, you can’t marry her!
I could hear the thunder rumbling outside my window as a bolt of lightning flashed outside my window.
I threw the letter onto the table and collapsed onto the floor. I started sobbing incessantly; all the emotions I had kept so well hidden inside me just started bubbling up through my eyeballs, coming out in a flood of tears.
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Holy s**t! You just had to add a little more to my pain, didn’t you? You have hit every emotional nerve with me on this one. I don’t know what JC may have been listening at the time he was reading it. But I do know what I had on. “Disturbia” by Rihanna, but I should have had on “Mercy” by Duffy. Excellent chapter by the way!
No offense. I like inense stories but this is a little to much for me. Can Helena catch a break….now what our girl is going to be a paraplegic. Cut Bette off pleeeease. I don’t think that car has done any more damage to Helena then Bette has. PPS despite my ranting. :)
Ok…I had to revive myself after reading that! The bomb shelter in your comments did not send off red flags initially…but I suspect you knew we would be going crazy and needed a safe place!!! lol!! Helena has to have some good things coming her way soon…sheesh! Wait…wait, you said something about happiness, right? Ok, I’m holding on to hope! This is sooo bad….but its soooo good! :) PPS
Has anybody seen EC? She was supposed to be out of her bomb shelter today. Where are you eunichicky?
Waaaah!!! Waaah!!! Waaaah!!! OK. I’m calm now. Waaah!!! Great chapter! PPS
HOLY SHIIIITTTT….WOW…oh my God..WOW…Eu…I am so speechless…my body is sweating as I fight the tear that wants to escape..BRAVO..BRAVO babe..aweosme chapter..(I swcretly grin at B&T…but I think I have a sneaky suspicion as to where you taking this you evil thing you:)Shoo….I need a ciggie…thanks girl for a wicked chapter…YAY…Im first to comment!!
Oh you did it now. Go ahead and hide in your bomb shelter. Did you have to mangle our heroine. This story just gets more painfuln now physically. (And people were begging me not to hurt Helena OMG!!)I need a ciggie too and I don’t even smoke. Ok. I’ll chain smoking until I you come out from hiding and give us your next post. You are just a horrible person eunichicky, horrible.*Squirly goes off in distress to find t_daze to bum a ciggie*
Ok, see… now, not only am I mad, but I’m fighting off tears as well. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I just want to throttle some sense into Bette. She’d better wake up from that fake fantasy she’s living in and face reality. Fate has different plans for her. I’m still holding out for my girls to get their sh*t together and find their way to each other. Now, Helena….. (sigh)…. EU did you have to run her over? My goodness… talk about sh*tty luck. Helena is getting it from every angle. First, she finds out her soul mate is marrying someone else… then she gets run the frick-n-frack over. There definitely is no lack of drama and action in this story. You are doing a superb job of bouncing my emotions all over the friggin place. LOL! I am so hopeful. That’s what keeps me coming back for more. I’m loving the ride, girl… loving it! What a way to start my morning! This is better than the coffee that I don’t drink. LOL! Keep it coming! PPS!
Oh NO!!!!!!! How could you???? You get back here and fix this woman! Gosh that was just so intense! (excellent writing though ;-) of course). PPS!!
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD… do you know what song I am listening to as I read that last part… you have got to be kidding me… I can’t believe what I read and what I was listening to… that is freaking insane… and yes it was ‘that’ song… OMG… I had a sneaking feeling when we were talking and you were dropping subtle hints to me that you might go here and well you did and you did such a beautiful job… I know its sad to say that when a character gets hurt… but that is the reason you are such an amazing writer you drive your words with passion and power and you cause your readers to feel for them and fall for them… you are AWESOME… no ciggie for me but I will take a double shot of this story very soon please, love and hugs my beautiful Dragonfly, JC (Latin Nephew of those Salsa Angels)
what the f$&@…I thought you said the torment was over…cruel, just cruel…this was so well done…I was like holding my breath waiting for what would happen…awesome…PPS
I am not a Helena and Bette fan. Did you do that to get Bette back here? Helena called Tasha so she must care for her.So let Tasha and Helena be together.
no no no…this is crazy and i can hardly wait til the next post!!! I’m so mad at Bette right now, I want to strangle her, lol. Yeah, so i’m lost and lonely because of girl trouble, you know how that goes, but everything will be okay, now, i’m off to write and you better be writing too lol
OH MY GOD!!!! Great chapter!! But please don’t hurt Helena and don’t let Bette marry Tina!!! Bette belongs to Helena!!!
Hi euni! This chapter reminds me of “An Affair to Remember”…is Bette gonna come see Helena all wrapped up in a blanky laying on her couch? Absolutely heartwrenching! Initially, I recoiled at the idea of Helena portrayed as a hooker…but your excellent writing has kept me coming back for more of the story! Can’t wait to see what happens next! :) And thanks for inspiring ash to write too! Blonde Bimbo is too funny!
holy fuckin shit….i’m so shocked at the turn of events sorri havent read in a while have had access to the internet but im glad i have now…Bette and Tina my god why and Tasha i’m glad shes there for Helena but whats happened is she dead im confused alittle.PPVS your work is so awesome i feel with every story youre growing as a writer…so im very pleased for you.