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Bisous; #16
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Bette, have you so easily forgotten about me?
I grabbed my phone and called the only person I could talk to.
Please pick up, please pick up, I begged in my thoughts.
I got her answering machine, and after I heard the beep, I tried my best to leave a clear message through the sound of my sobs, “T…Tash…are you there? P…ple..please please pick up the phone…I…I rea…really need to…talk to you…pl…”
I suddenly heard someone pick up.
“Hello?” Tash voice said, her voice filled with concern, “Helena? What’s wrong?”
“It’s…it’s…Bette,” I tried to say.
“Hush,” Tash replied, “Calm down, ok, I need you to breathe.”
I took a few gasps of air before I continued, “It’s Bette,” I said, the tears still running down my cheeks, “She’s getting married to Tina.”
Tash kept silent for a while, “Please don’t cry, babe…”
She called me babe, after all this time and everything I did, she still called me babe.
“I…could I…come over?” I asked, a little apprehensive, “I don’t want to be alone right now.”
Tash hesitated for a moment before replying, “Sure, I’ll meet you outside, it’s raining.”
“Thank you,” I said, using my hand to brush away my tears, “I’ll come now.”
I put down my phone and grabbed my jacket, stuffing some cash into my pockets and rushing out of my apartment. I couldn’t bear to stay there a moment longer.
The rain had started coming down hard and I walked through it without an umbrella. I never had qualms about getting caught in the rain. I dashed out, trying to hail a cab,
Raindrops fell onto me, drenching me in their cool embrace. I looked up letting them fall onto my face, masking the tears that I had cried.
Nothing could describe the urgency I felt when I finally got into a cab and was on the way to Tash’s.
This feeling of not wanting to be alone, I just needed someone to hold me.
The cab stopped across the road from her house, and when I saw her standing outside her door with an umbrella, a wave of comfort crashed over me. I got out of the cab, waiting to cross the road.
“Tash,” I called out as I dashed towards her, the raindrops blinding me slightly.
I ran across the road, and the next thing I knew, I saw her running towards me, her mouth moving as she called my name.
I felt as if the entirety of the world was moving in slow motion, all the sounds were muted. I could still feel the rain pouring down onto me, but I was rooted to the ground as I turned to see a pair of bright lights speeding towards me, my eyes widened.
My body went limp as I was flung backwards like a rag doll, falling onto the road. Numbness swelled through my body; I couldn’t feel anything.
“Babe…” I heard Tash scream.
That was the last thing I heard before everything went black.
And then, there was nothing.
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Holy s**t! You just had to add a little more to my pain, didn’t you? You have hit every emotional nerve with me on this one. I don’t know what JC may have been listening at the time he was reading it. But I do know what I had on. “Disturbia” by Rihanna, but I should have had on “Mercy” by Duffy. Excellent chapter by the way!
No offense. I like inense stories but this is a little to much for me. Can Helena catch a break….now what our girl is going to be a paraplegic. Cut Bette off pleeeease. I don’t think that car has done any more damage to Helena then Bette has. PPS despite my ranting. :)
Ok…I had to revive myself after reading that! The bomb shelter in your comments did not send off red flags initially…but I suspect you knew we would be going crazy and needed a safe place!!! lol!! Helena has to have some good things coming her way soon…sheesh! Wait…wait, you said something about happiness, right? Ok, I’m holding on to hope! This is sooo bad….but its soooo good! :) PPS
Has anybody seen EC? She was supposed to be out of her bomb shelter today. Where are you eunichicky?
Waaaah!!! Waaah!!! Waaaah!!! OK. I’m calm now. Waaah!!! Great chapter! PPS
HOLY SHIIIITTTT….WOW…oh my God..WOW…Eu…I am so speechless…my body is sweating as I fight the tear that wants to escape..BRAVO..BRAVO babe..aweosme chapter..(I swcretly grin at B&T…but I think I have a sneaky suspicion as to where you taking this you evil thing you:)Shoo….I need a ciggie…thanks girl for a wicked chapter…YAY…Im first to comment!!
Oh you did it now. Go ahead and hide in your bomb shelter. Did you have to mangle our heroine. This story just gets more painfuln now physically. (And people were begging me not to hurt Helena OMG!!)I need a ciggie too and I don’t even smoke. Ok. I’ll chain smoking until I you come out from hiding and give us your next post. You are just a horrible person eunichicky, horrible.*Squirly goes off in distress to find t_daze to bum a ciggie*
Ok, see… now, not only am I mad, but I’m fighting off tears as well. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I just want to throttle some sense into Bette. She’d better wake up from that fake fantasy she’s living in and face reality. Fate has different plans for her. I’m still holding out for my girls to get their sh*t together and find their way to each other. Now, Helena….. (sigh)…. EU did you have to run her over? My goodness… talk about sh*tty luck. Helena is getting it from every angle. First, she finds out her soul mate is marrying someone else… then she gets run the frick-n-frack over. There definitely is no lack of drama and action in this story. You are doing a superb job of bouncing my emotions all over the friggin place. LOL! I am so hopeful. That’s what keeps me coming back for more. I’m loving the ride, girl… loving it! What a way to start my morning! This is better than the coffee that I don’t drink. LOL! Keep it coming! PPS!
Oh NO!!!!!!! How could you???? You get back here and fix this woman! Gosh that was just so intense! (excellent writing though ;-) of course). PPS!!
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD… do you know what song I am listening to as I read that last part… you have got to be kidding me… I can’t believe what I read and what I was listening to… that is freaking insane… and yes it was ‘that’ song… OMG… I had a sneaking feeling when we were talking and you were dropping subtle hints to me that you might go here and well you did and you did such a beautiful job… I know its sad to say that when a character gets hurt… but that is the reason you are such an amazing writer you drive your words with passion and power and you cause your readers to feel for them and fall for them… you are AWESOME… no ciggie for me but I will take a double shot of this story very soon please, love and hugs my beautiful Dragonfly, JC (Latin Nephew of those Salsa Angels)
what the f$&@…I thought you said the torment was over…cruel, just cruel…this was so well done…I was like holding my breath waiting for what would happen…awesome…PPS
I am not a Helena and Bette fan. Did you do that to get Bette back here? Helena called Tasha so she must care for her.So let Tasha and Helena be together.
no no no…this is crazy and i can hardly wait til the next post!!! I’m so mad at Bette right now, I want to strangle her, lol. Yeah, so i’m lost and lonely because of girl trouble, you know how that goes, but everything will be okay, now, i’m off to write and you better be writing too lol
OH MY GOD!!!! Great chapter!! But please don’t hurt Helena and don’t let Bette marry Tina!!! Bette belongs to Helena!!!
Hi euni! This chapter reminds me of “An Affair to Remember”…is Bette gonna come see Helena all wrapped up in a blanky laying on her couch? Absolutely heartwrenching! Initially, I recoiled at the idea of Helena portrayed as a hooker…but your excellent writing has kept me coming back for more of the story! Can’t wait to see what happens next! :) And thanks for inspiring ash to write too! Blonde Bimbo is too funny!
holy fuckin shit….i’m so shocked at the turn of events sorri havent read in a while have had access to the internet but im glad i have now…Bette and Tina my god why and Tasha i’m glad shes there for Helena but whats happened is she dead im confused alittle.PPVS your work is so awesome i feel with every story youre growing as a writer…so im very pleased for you.