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Bisous; #19
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We continued moving as Bette described the people around us.
“We’re going into the park now,” she told me.
I heard the sounds of the traffic slowly get softer and softer as we walked into the park. The air seemed different and I closed my eyes, taking a long breath.
“It’s coming to the end of your favorite season, Lena,” I heard Bette say.
We came to a stop and she sat beside me on a bench. She took my hand in hers and continued, “The sun is out but it’s still too gloomy a day. The branches are depressingly bare, but the leaves have collected on the ground in big brown mountains. All the grass is nearly covered with leaves…”
“Bring me to them,” I said to her, squeezing her hand, “I want to go the leaves.”
Bette stood up and used two hands to lift me off the wheelchair. She put my arm through hers as she walked me onto the grass. I could feel the moist soil beneath my shoes as the smell of dry leaves became stronger.
“Ok,” Bette said, “There is a large mount of leaves in front of you. What do you want to do now?”
“Face my back to them,” I told her, lacing my fingers through hers.
She turned me around, knowing full well what I was about to do.
I leaned backwards, letting go of Bette’s hands, allowing myself to free fall onto the leaves. I laughed so hard, enjoying the temporary feeling of just falling. I felt the dry leaves around me as I sat up and found Bette’s legs, playfully trying to pull her towards me.
“Lena! I’m gonna beat you!” she screamed, “Stop it, stop it, stop it! Aaarrrhhh!” she yelled as she fell beside me, breaking out in loud laughter, “Gawd, Helena, you’re still such a child.”
I felt her sit up beside me, brushing the leaves off me. I closed my eyes as she ran her fingers through my hair, pushing it behind my ears. Her hands moved to gently stroke my cheeks as she pulled me closer to her, placing a kiss on my lips. I believe that my expression might have been one of complete shock, but she tilted my head again as she moved in for another kiss.
My senses seemed more sensitive since I lost my sight. Every sound, touch, taste and smell seemed to be magnified; and this kiss was so different from all the kisses I had felt on my lips before. I could feel the softness of her lips and the warmth of her breath; I felt the rough, yet gentle touch of her tongue on mine as she slipped it into my mouth, deepening the kiss.
She pulled away and I think my expression of shock remained unchanged.
She laced her fingers through mine, as she leaned in close to my ear and whispered, “I love you, Helena.”
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That was so beautifully writen and much needed laughter for the both of them. I hate the fact that Helena is blind but sometimes a tragic moment can bring people closer together. Bette and Helena have loved each other from the start neither had the courage to confide in the other….maybe now they are starting to see what is important and can be happy together.
wow ok love is it then…im glad i came back to check on new updates tonight.I love the leaves part so romantic and sweet. i guess its true about the fact that when you lose your sight you become more prone to all your different senses…and Helena has indeed.I think you should post more on Sundays lol.You made me feel happy because i was feeling kind of down tonight so thank you hun…please update soon, does Helena actually still love Bette or does she love Tasha?I dont know im totally feeling what she would be right now totally confused. Yes my gf is a TiBetter she thinks that BeLena are too alike to ever work out but i disagree they are both strong women and i think thats what both of them want. They dont want someone who will be a pushover in the relationship like Tina is made out to be when shes with Bette. What do you think? Oh great update by the way just in time for my b’day as my bday is tomorrow so please update 2moz just for me huh?Love always Caramel.x
Very sweet. It will be interesting to see what Helena’s response will be to this second kiss and this confession of love. Hopefully she will be open to it because I am waiting for the massive orgasm that she has never had to happen or is that too much to ask.
Eu..You never disappoint..i get the biggest smile on my face when i see a post from you.the emotion you portrayed was so visual and heart felt and thats only thanks to your amazing writing.i really cant wait to read the next one.keep up the fabulous writing.xxx
Damn that was good! This story just keep getting better. You do a fantastic job in writing this. Please post more when you can!
*pat pat pat*…Good euni…Good girl! :)
How many of us have fallen into leaves as young peopl. and in the OLDEN days would burn them such a wonderful smell. I hope Bette is being trueful with Hekena, Only Bette can get her on her feet and into the real world again. Once the stress is over she will see again with those beautiful eyes. thanks
one word HAPPY…and a few more…your writing was so vivid, I closed my eyes to reflect on the words…LOVED IT!!!!!
See… Good things happen when I’m gone. ;) So sorry, E. I usually have very busy weekends and to top this weekend off my internet was acting up. I’m heading to the forum now to face your awful questions. :P Great chapter, as always! :)
Oh, EU! I can’t tell you how much I LOVED that chapter! My smile can’t get big enough! That was wonderful! Now, I am all warm inside. LOL! =) You have an excellent way of putting me right in the story with everything that’s happening. I felt as if I was walking with them and watching them interact. I can’t explain how good that feels! with Helena falling into the pile of leaves, I was taken back to my childhood when I used to do the same. Gosh, my cheeks hurt from smiling so much! You are truly a great writer, girl! I am now looking forward to more stories from you once this one is completed… Not that I am rushing you or anything. =) I think you are spoiling me, because you post on a regular basis and I know I won’t have to wait forever for another brilliantly written chapter. Thank you so much for giving me such a captivating story to read. I have experienced a myriad of emotions while reading this and I am glad that I did. I love stories about Belena just as much as I love them about Tibette. Like I said before….. YOU ROCK, EU!!!
OOOOOOHhhhhhhhhhhhhhEEEEEEEEEE, bout time Euni,I hope Bette really means it and is not feeling like she is for sympthys sake. Somehow all the relief of this chapter scares me with you as the author, maybe they can just stay happy for a short while??????? Please. Thank you, Md
Hey Cuz… yay… I loved this chapter from despair to the ultimate love… weeeee love it so much… you… you… jezzz you just blow me away… with each and every stroke of your magical pen you create tapestries of amazing color blended with amazing emotions ending with amazing passion… you are simply the best my beautiful cuz… and well yeah one day I’ll be as good as you…one of these days… love ya, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and Cuz to the exceptional E)
It’s hard for all of them. Sure Helena has the biggest burden but to see a beloved suffer is nearly as hard as to suffer personally. I hope this trip in the park is not only a short break but a breakthrough. I’m looking forward to read more from you. :)
REFRESH… HAHA LOVE YA, JC
Very nice…You know, its funny: One of the clear emotions that Helena seemed to feel was loneliness. It is wonderful that there is actually so much love around her! Will our lovely lady really “see” this? What a beautiful day for her and a lovely walk in the park. PPS
this was so beautiful. I loved it how Bette was being Hel’s eyes and made her laugh. I loved the tender moent between them in the park and I really hope they can go from there. You’re doing so great sweetie, I love every moment of it, now what about the Teenage one?
Yeah Cuz… what about the Teenage one huh… :P… hehe…REFRESH… huggles, JC
Fantastic!!!! I loved it!!! Just keep getting better. Can’t wait to read the next chapter!