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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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That said, Carmen exited the kitchen to return to her previous activity
of cleaning the living room. Leaving a baffled but very happy and very
in love Shane to soon follow.
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“What would you like for dinner?” Helena asked, adjusting the Prada
purse over her shoulder as she walked into Trader Joe’s with Alice.
They were there to shop for groceries at Helena’s insistence because
she just recently saw that the refrigerator in the blonde’s apartment
was barren except for a bag of bite sized carrots and a half empty two
liter bottle of Coke. On seeing this, Helena insisted they go grocery
shopping right away so Helena could cook Alice a proper meal. But she
had yet to determine what kind of proper meal the writer would enjoying
eating the most as Alice wasn’t too helpful in her replies. “And please
refrain from suggesting I should cook you a meal entirely consisting of
desserts. I would never do such a thing, particularly for an adult
woman who should have far better eating habits.”
“You’re no fun,” said Alice with a pout, holding open the door to the
grocery store to allow Helena to enter. “What’s so wrong of wanting a
dinner that’s made up of a triple fudge banana split and deep fried
Twinkies? I think it would be good for my sugar levels.”
“It would be good by means of putting you into an insulin induced
coma,” said Helena dryly, reaching back to take Alice’s hand and pull
her into the store. Walking over to the carts, she put her purse into
it and pulled it back to move it over to Alice. Wearing a teasing
smile, she drawled, “You can be in charge of pushing the cart, darling.”
“Now I get it. The only reason I’m here is to serve as manual labor,”
Alice grumbled good naturedly, taking the cart and following dutifully
after Helena who was already headed towards the produce section.
Watching the British woman pick up a head of broccoli to inspect it,
she groaned. “Don’t get broccoli. I hate broccoli.”
A grin quirking on her lips, Helena lifted an eyebrow and looked over
her shoulder at Alice. “You mean to say you wouldn’t enjoy seeing me
chopping broccoli?” she drawled humorously.
“No, I wouldn’t. I hate–” Alice stopped in the middle of her rant as
she got the joke. Rolling her eyes, she pushed the cart forward to
lightly bump it into Helena’s *****. The heiress yelped at this and
jumped forward, making the writer laugh at this reaction. Leaning
towards Helena she sang playfully, “There’s a lady I know. If I didn’t
know her, she’d be the lady I didn’t know.”
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)