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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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“Yes, darling,” said Helena with an amused chuckle, kneeling down to
look through the impressive collection of music that Alice owned.
Picking out a cd, she put it in the player and adjusted the stereo
volume. In seconds the distinctive sound of Tegan and Sara filled the
air. Looking back to Alice, she smiled and said, “Is it all right if we
listen to this? I haven’t heard their music in quite some time.”
“Fine with me,” said Alice, returning the smile as Helena walked over
to the couch. “I love their music.” Reaching out to take Helena’s hand,
she pulled the heiress over to her until Helena was hovering over her.
“Come here,” Alice murmured, her voice low and husky. She scooted over
to make room and tugged Helena down until the British woman lay with
her on the couch. Half of her body lying on top of Alice and half not.
She felt more than heard Helena’s sigh of pleasure at this contact and
smiling, Alice stroked curly black hair and said absently, “We should
play the question game.”
“Question game?” asked Helena, looking intrigued. “What is that?”
“Basically what it sounds like,” said Alice, tilting her head to look
into Helena’s blue eyes. Smiling softly and tucking a stray lock of
hair behind Helena’s ear. “We just ask each other questions. Little
stuff, big stuff, stupid stuff, just to find out something new about
each other. Dana and I…” Alice stopped in the middle of her sentence
on saying this and a pained look crossed over her features then she
continued, “Dana and I used to do this all the time. It’s how we got so
close.”
“We don’t have to play if it reminds you of unpleasant things,” said
Helena gently, caressing Alice’s cheek with the back of her hand. “We
don’t have to do anything in fact. It’s enough for me to simply be with
you.”
“Me too,” Alice admitted in a quiet hush, looking shyly at Helena. She
swallowed the lump in her throat and said, “I want to play the game
with you.” She narrowed her eyes expressively and said in mock haughty
tones, “How else will I get the new dirt on you? Being a super spy
makes you wily and immune to my usual efforts at gathering covert
intel.”
“I wasn’t aware you were attempting to be covert,” Helena teased,
relieved to see Alice returning to her former good spirits. “Shall I
ask the first question then?”
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)