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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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“Shoot,” replied Alice, grinning big and snuggling into the couch to gain a more comfortable position. “I’m all answers.”
Studying Alice thoughtfully for a long moment, Helena folded her arms
on the blonde’s chest and rested her chin on top of them. “What did you
want to be as a child when you thought of growing up?” she asked softly.
“First thing I wanted to be or the first realistic thing I wanted to
be?” asked Alice with a mischievous grin. When Helena poked her in the
side in a sign of minor aggravation, Alice laughed and said, “Don’t get
violent. I’m going to answer your question, I promise. I’m just asking
for some clarification here.”
“Both,” said Helena. When Alice opened her mouth, she interrupted the
blonde and pointed what was meant to be a stern finger in her face as
she said, “And do not tell me that is against the imaginary rules you
just now created inside of your delightfully twisted brain.”
“You’re freakishly psychic,” said Alice, eyeing Helena suspiciously. “You know that, right?”
“Answer my questions,” Helena ordered, poking the writer in the side
again, causing Alice to squeal with laughter and futilely try to squirm
away from the heiress.
“I take back what I said earlier,” sputtered Alice through her laughter, speaking in wheezing breaths. “You’re totally mean.”
“Very well, I am indeed mean, but you still must answer my questions,”
replied Helena staidly. “What did you wish to be when you became older?”
Calming down until her full on laughter was nothing but small
chuckling, Alice wiped at her eyes and taking a huge breath to calm
herself, she said, “A lumberjack and a rock star.”
“A lumberjack and a rock star,” Helena echoed blankly. Tilting her head
thoughtfully, she asked, “Which if those is meant to be the more
realistic career, darling?”
“Rock star,” said Alice easily. “I mean, most people can figure out
what you need to do to become a rock star but a becoming a lumberjack?”
Alice shrugged and then snuggled into the couch, gazing up at the
heiress. “Who the ***** knows about that one.”
“I can understand the desire to become a famous singer but why in the
world did you wish to be a lumberjack as a child?” asked Helena,
genuinely perplexed as it was such a very odd thing to want to be.
Especially for someone like Alice who considered going to the park as
being able to see nature in its true habitant.
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)