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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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“You’re ***** her?” said Veronica, looking surprised but very
impressed at the same time. Leaning forward, a definite gleam of
interest in her eyes, she asked, “How good is she? That little PSA for
anorexia and bad hair care turned me down.”
Deciding that she would keep her opinion that what Veronica just told
her clearly qualified as sexual harassment and wholly inappropriate
behavior towards an employee, Helena instead grimaced and said, “I am
not ***** her as you say it. Shane happens to be friends with someone
I care for.” Helena soon froze as she realized exactly what she said
and reddening, she quickly added, “What I rather meant to say is she is
friends with someone I’m close with and it was she who provided me with
the means in which to contact you.”
“Well,” Veronica drawled, smirking and giving a quiet chuckle of
amusement. She tilted her head to one side and said, “Aren’t you a
***** cute one?” Helena scowled at this and chuckling again, Veronica
said, “So just who do you care for and are close to that had the weight
in gold that is my ***** number?”
“Alice Pieszecki, she’s a writer for LA Magazine who also has a weekly
radio program at KCRW,” said Helena, her blush returning for reasons
unknown to her. She was merely talking to Veronica about Alice, after
all. Why should that be something to blush about?
“Cute blonde, looks like she’s ***** short when she really isn’t?”
said Veronica, frowning slightly as she searched her memory. “Perky as
***** voice?”
“Yes,” said Helena slowly, matching Veronica’s frown and her eyes
narrowing. Though she wasn’t really sure why, she felt herself becoming
irritated at Veronica’s description of Alice. Or perhaps she was
irritated at the familiarity in which the other woman spoke of her.
Either way, Helena was irritated and she wasn’t really sure why. “How
is it you know Alice?”
“Interviews,” revealed Veronica dismissively. “I think her magazine has
her covering the entertainment section sometimes.” Studying Helena for
a long moment, a smile tugged at her lips and Veronica drawled, “It’s
never ***** dull with you dykes, is it? A constant soap opera of *****
and now I get to ***** watch it up close.” Pulling out yet another
cigarette and lighting it, she released a satisfied chuckle. “I’m going
to love this damn job, I just know it.”
And for that, Helena had no reply.
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)