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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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There were times when Gabby either loved or hated the fact that in the
***** and ***** community everybody always knew everybody else’s
business. Usually she hated it because she had dated and successfully
spurned enough women that it created a flourishing anti-Gabby movement
of sorts within the community. Something that made it increasingly
difficult to continue her almost life long pursuit of seducing and
bedding women. But right now Gabby loved the community for being so
goddamn gossipy as it provided her with directions to the home of one
Jenny Schecter.
The same gossip that provided Gabby with directions also told her Jenny
was roommates with none other than Shane McCutcheon who, until
recently, rivaled Gabby when it came to romancing women. Though Gabby,
along with all of West Hollywood, knew that Shane had rejected her
former ways thanks to the unwavering love of a certain Latina DJ, she
wasn’t quite prepared for seeing evidence of the hair stylist’s
domestication for herself. After knocking on the front door several
times in a futile attempt to get the attention of those inside the
house, despite the loud music playing, Gabby decided to take matters
into her own hands. That’s why she walked to the back of the house,
stepped up to the small porch and peered through the window only to
snicker derisively at what she saw.
Shane happily playing house with Carmen, singing along to the song that
was playing loud enough to shake the walls and block out Gabby’s
knocking at the front door as they cleaned the living room. The hair
stylist grinned and easily caught the misplaced throw pillow tossed to
her by Carmen as she sang along to the lyrics, directing them at her
girlfriend.
“The clothes she wears, the ***** ways. Make an old man wish for younger days. She knows she’s built and knows how to please.”
Placing the pillow neatly down on the couch, Shane danced her way over
to Carmen, smiling deliciously slow and hooking her fingers into the
belt loops of the DJ’s jeans. Pulling her smoothly forward and against
the hair stylist who continued to sing along to the lyrics, making her
girlfriend grin widely. Ducking her head down, Shane murmured something
into Carmen’s ear that caused the Latina to burst into delighted
laughter and capture the other woman’s lips for a kiss. Soon one kiss
led to another and another and as the couple appeared to almost be
sinking into each other due to the depth of the kisses, Gabby decided
she really should announce her presence. Because while she thought
herself to be many things considered to be perverted by many people a
peeping tom didn’t happen to be among them.
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)