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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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At least, for now it didn’t.
Rapping her knuckles against the window, Gabby smirked as the couple
barely managed to pull away from their make out session and turned to
look at her with identical expressions of annoyance. Their matching
faces soon came to an end as Shane scowled deeply on seeing who
interrupted them and Carmen simply looked puzzled.
Moving forward in her elegant gait that seemed more leisurely than
usual, Shane opened the door and greeted Gabby with a hard stare.
“Alice isn’t here,” she stated, her eyes narrowed in severe disapproval.
“Miss Manners, aren’t we?” said Gabby sardonically, tilting her head to
one side to study the other woman. Lifting an eyebrow, she smirked upon
getting a closer look at Shane’s worn orange shirt that featured the
phrase ‘Everyone Loves A Latin Girl’ on it. “Nice shirt,” Gabby
drawled, humor lacing her tones and chuckling when Shane reddened as
she looked down at the shirt that she borrowed from Carmen. She had
forgotten she was even wearing it. “But it isn’t entirely accurate is
it? You being a pale face and all.”
“It’s plenty accurate,” Shane murmured, instinctively leaning into
Carmen when the DJ appeared at her side and wound an arm around her
waist. “I love a Latin girl.”
“And you’re everyone,” scoffed Gabby.
“You want to tell me why you’re still here?” asked Shane, losing all
patience with Gabby and her typically pointless mind games. “I told you
already that Alice isn’t around.”
“And I’m not here to see Alice.” On hearing this, Shane’s brow
instantly furrowed in contemplation. Knowing what the hair stylist was
surely about to assume, Gabby snorted and said derisively, “And if you
think I’m here for you then your delusions of being desirable to all
dykes has reached record breaking new heights.”
“Shane doesn’t think that,” said Carmen fiercely, immediately defending
her girlfriend from what she perceived as a verbal attack and glaring
at Gabby as she did so. “And if you think she does, you don’t know
anything about her.”
“A travesty, I’m sure,” Gabby pronounced, her tones dripping with
complete disdain. “Why just think of all the sexual diseases I’m
missing out on having transmitted to me.”
The second these words left Gabby’s mouth and were heard by Carmen’s
ears, her face darkened violently and she lunged at Gabby. And if not
for Shane’s arms wrapping firmly but gently around Carmen’s waist to
hold her back, there was no doubt in anyone’s mind that a punch would
have surely been thrown. One that would have most definitely knocked
Gabby out. Nuzzling the DJ’s neck, Shane slipped her hands underneath
Carmen’s shirt to stretch her fingers out and play over the soft skin
of her abdomen in a soothing and wandering caress.
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)