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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Three
“So you say,” chuckled Helena in amusement.
“If I never got to know you so well, I knew you well. Maybe I would be
fine. Baby, you know that I can’t tell. Why you should be mine. Shake
your love. I just can’t shake your love.”
Turning to Helena and wearing a supremely satisfied look on her
features, Alice declared, “There! Did you hear that? Shake Your Love
was totally one of her happier songs and even it had angst in it.
Debbie Gibson is such a source of musical melodrama.” Moments after she
said this, she noticed just where they were and looking at the various
ships Alice frowned as she murmured, “Why are we in Marina del Rey?”
Smiling at Alice’s confusion, Helena replied, “You said to take you
somewhere you wouldn’t have a chance of seeing Dana. I rather doubt
you’ll see her anywhere about here. Besides,” she said softly,
unbuckling her seatbelt now. “I wanted to show you something.”
“Show me what?” asked Alice, confused but her curiosity piqued. She
quickly followed suit and unbuckled her seatbelt to jog out of the car
and over to Helena.
“The place which, should circumstances ever allow it, I would chose to
spend all of my days and nights at,” Helena revealed, her blue eyes
sparkling with excitement. Taking Alice’s hand, she led the woman
towards the wharf and greeted the man who sat at the entrance with his
legs propped up as he read the Los Angeles Times. “Hard at work per
usual, are we Jerry?”
Jerry jumped in his seat and sat upright looking panicked until he saw
it was Helena. Then he rolled his eyes and folded the paper in his lap
and scowled good naturedly at her. “You tryin’ to give me a heart
attack, Peabody? I thought you were Carter comin’ back to ride my *****
more.”
“While that sounds like an entirely pleasant experience, I’m afraid I
have no desire to participate in it,” drawled Helena in teasing tones.
“And if I did, wouldn’t it only serve to make your wife jealous?
Something I certainly do not want to do as I’ve only managed to make
her like me in fairly recent days.”
“Not your fault,” Jerry said, sighing deeply as he scratched the back
of his head. “She wouldn’t believe me when I said you was *****, right? I
dunno, seems sad but I guess you and me are lucky that we ran into you
on a date making out with a hot chick.” His smile turned mischievous
and he went on, “What happened to that chick anyway? You–” Jerry
stopped in the middle of his sentence when his brain finally took
notice of the fact Helena was standing in front of him holding hands
with Alice. “Never mind!” Jerry cried out, laughing nervously. “You and
your friend wanna get to fishing or you know…”
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(17 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
I really have to stop reading all of Helena’s parts in a British accent. I’m annoying myself….dreiser, you rock.
Thanks for such an endearing Helena, its far too easy to get bogged down by the cannon Helena but your tale takes me far away from that and into the realm where I quite like her and the lovely Alice together. Keep up the tension and please never stop giving us loyal and loving fans more!!!
can i say that i love that you use the right terminolgy in the right settings. Seems like such a small thing, but it isn’t. Like a tennis match, not game. Helena’s quarters, not room. You always make the right reference in the right place. And the details do not go unnoticed, thanks – it makes for such great flow and reading.
A human catch and a human reeling it in – wonderful analogy with the fishing and the pending hook-up. loved it dreiser.
Alice and Helena together are so cute!
So much sexual tension!!!!!!!! Its driving me crazy. Both you and Sulky still have not even let Alice and Helena kiss!!! Someone let my girls be happy please! By the way, I love you, you are the greatest writer ever. I wait for like two weeks for this story, its kills me but when it gets here… bliss. Keep it up babe and thanks.
I loke Helena and Alice together. Lets keep then that way.
alicesgirl – you are too right
I’m loving your story dreiser.
I love this budding romance. I will look for an update as soon as I get back from the Mich Fest.
It’s so true you and Sulky are killing me, please I need to read happy helacious. Mmmm I just wrote that? Well in my danish heart there is some place to this ship too, and it’s all your fault :P . Thanks.
WOW! that was really tense. i dont think i can take much more! i hope they hook up really soon.