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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Three
Unbearably soft hands that were surprisingly cool despite the warm
weather pressed against Alice’s face, soothing her, and when she lifted
her eyes she was met with Helena smiling but somehow looking utterly
solemn at the same time. In such a way that let the writer know what
she was about to say was not to be disputed. “I would never consider
anything you might do for me to be lame,” Helena said in a quiet
murmur. “Do remember that, darling.”
“I will,” said Alice in hushed tones, ducking her eyes again.
“Good,” Helena murmured, sounding pleased as she pushed a lock of
blonde hair behind Alice’s ear. Taking the writer’s hand in her own,
she squeezed it tenderly then resumed their walk. “Well, well, here is
the workaholic of which I spoke,” she drew the words out humorously.
Giving Alice’s hand another squeeze she pulled it away to cup her hands
over her mouth to call to the man arranging fishing gear on a nearby
ship, “Shouldn’t you be at work, Mitchell?”
The tall man in mismatched plaid shorts and a faded t-shirt for the San
Francisco Giants shaded his eyes then grinned as he shouted in reply,
“You should talk, Peabody! What’re you doing here? I’m getting paid to
take this time off. You’re just slacking I bet.”
“Something of that nature,” Helena chuckled, walking over to the ship
and grinning at Mitchell as he climbed down to meet them. Tilting her
head to one side, she asked playfully, “Does the slacker have
permission to come aboard?”
“Of course,” said Mitchell, returning the grin. “Hey,” his eyes
glinted. “Does you being here mean you’re going out on the water?
Because I was about to head out with maybe Roderick and Veile but if
you’re here…”
“We could once again take my ship onto these waters,” supplied Helena
dryly. “Allowing all of you to bicker over who has truly earned the
supreme honor of becoming the temporary captain of my fine vessel.”
“Bingo,” Mitchell said, making a shooting noise and forming his hands
into guns as he grinned at Helena. That’s when he noticed Alice and his
grin turned a tad naughty. “And who is this?”
“Alice Pieszecki meet Robert Mitchell,” said Helena in simple
introduction. She eyed Mitchell suspiciously as he reached out for
Alice’s hand to no doubt kiss the top of it and stopped the gesture
from happening by whapping him lightly. “You promise to must cease your
incessant attempts at seduction if you wish to go anywhere near my ship
today.”
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(17 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
I really have to stop reading all of Helena’s parts in a British accent. I’m annoying myself….dreiser, you rock.
Thanks for such an endearing Helena, its far too easy to get bogged down by the cannon Helena but your tale takes me far away from that and into the realm where I quite like her and the lovely Alice together. Keep up the tension and please never stop giving us loyal and loving fans more!!!
can i say that i love that you use the right terminolgy in the right settings. Seems like such a small thing, but it isn’t. Like a tennis match, not game. Helena’s quarters, not room. You always make the right reference in the right place. And the details do not go unnoticed, thanks – it makes for such great flow and reading.
A human catch and a human reeling it in – wonderful analogy with the fishing and the pending hook-up. loved it dreiser.
Alice and Helena together are so cute!
So much sexual tension!!!!!!!! Its driving me crazy. Both you and Sulky still have not even let Alice and Helena kiss!!! Someone let my girls be happy please! By the way, I love you, you are the greatest writer ever. I wait for like two weeks for this story, its kills me but when it gets here… bliss. Keep it up babe and thanks.
I loke Helena and Alice together. Lets keep then that way.
alicesgirl – you are too right
I’m loving your story dreiser.
I love this budding romance. I will look for an update as soon as I get back from the Mich Fest.
It’s so true you and Sulky are killing me, please I need to read happy helacious. Mmmm I just wrote that? Well in my danish heart there is some place to this ship too, and it’s all your fault :P . Thanks.
WOW! that was really tense. i dont think i can take much more! i hope they hook up really soon.