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Black – Chapter 17
Shane got into the hotel lobby and went to the reception where she asked for a spare key so that she could enter her room. The receptionist gladly helped Shane with her wish, and wondered where the hell Shane’s been with her looking like that. Shane gave the young blonde receptionist a polite smile and thanked her.
She made her way up in the lift and walked to her room. She wondered where Lily is but thought that she must be in good hands since Ed and Carmen are there with her. As soon she got into her dimly light hotel room, she starts to untie her tie and unbutton her shirt, thinking that nobody is here since she can’t hear Oprah on TV and the room has been cleanly cleared of any boxes of random food scattered around by her daughter and Ed.
Shane flicked the switch on the wall and the big room was lightened up in an instant. She continued to unbutton her shirt as she stands in front of her bed. Shane heard noises coming from the living room part of the penthouse suit and jerked her head to the right to see if she could see anything.
“… Shane…” Shane heard, and suddenly Carmen emerged at the side of the entrance to the bedroom. The voice scared the daylights out of Shane as she took a step back and fell on the bed behind her.
“Jesus Christ! Carmen… how the hell did you get in here?!?” Shane asked as she got back her composure and stand up straightly with her shirt all unbuttoned revealing the middle part of her upper half body, just covering the sides and her breasts.
“I asked Ed…” Carmen said. She took a step towards Shane as she laughed at her wife. Carmen looked closely at Shane, wondering where she had been, she had bags under her eyes, her shirt all stained. “What happened to you…?” Carmen asked with a concerned in her voice, she looked at the blood stain of Shane’s shirt.
“… nothing…” Shane lied. She looked down at her self, seeing that she’s baring her body. She quickly buttoned the middle button of the shirt and looked at Carmen, who snickered at her actions.
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(36 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
I love this story. I can’t wait to find out how Helena and Shane met, and please let Shane and Alice work things out. PMS
I’m with Kamikaze. Is Shane stong enough to let Carmen go? Will she realize that Carmen isn’t good enough for her (anymore)? Good luck with your last year in school! Just post as often as you can. ;)
all thru the story, i was all for shalice. since reading this chapter, i totally want it to change back to sharmen!!!
I miss this story – hope you update again soon
Very good
god!! it was so sad. i want shane to be happy so i am a shalice’s side but dont know too like carm how to get over sharmen. you are really my fav writer. thanks for awesome update. pps!
WOW…I said that last post too, but your writing is brilliant. Alice needs to mark her territory, but is Shane really strong enough to let Carmen go?? PPS
this is really good and i hope that Shane will fight for Alice and not let Carmen get the best of her!! PPS!
ok great post but i guess im in the minority here im a sharmen fan all the way , i love alice but its a little weird for em to think of shane and her together as more than best friends , i love the shane and carmen relationship and i agree with carmen they are meant to be , so for me I hope maybe shane and carmen work things out in this one but i guess i have to wait and see.