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    Black – Chapter. 18

    Story written on February 15, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Shane and Carmen, Shane and Alice, Alice and Carmen… Shane and Prada???

     

     

     

    Shane closed her eyes. She was afraid that this would happen. She was afraid that she’ll fall again. She was afraid of what her answer is going to be. She was afraid that Carmen would ultimately hurt her again. She was afraid to go on. She was afraid to let Carmen go. She was afraid thinking what might of happen if she didn’t give it another try. She was afraid of never sever seeing Alice again. She was afraid that she is probably making the biggest mistake of her life.

     

    Carmen’s words seeps through her mind slowly and deeply. “I don’t know how to baby…” Shane’s strong arms held out on to the wall, her wife standing between them, staring up at her. Carmen’s hand held on to Shane’s body. Their body warmth and recent activity keeping them arm and perspire.

     

    “Don’t you wanna give us another chance?” asked Carmen. She stared at the closed eyed Shane. Her face was emotionless, her dark mane messy and covering part of her left eyes. She almost looks like she’s too tired to handle the situation right now.

     

    “I don’t know. Is it wrong of me to say that…? I don’t know.” She replied back and opened her eyes. “Don’t say that Shane. Give me another chance.” Pleaded Carmen, as her right hand went up to Shane’s left side of her body, up to her chest, to where her wife’s heart is beating. “I want this back.” She said as she felt Shane’s heart beating steadily. “I want this to be mine again. I’ll take care of it… and I’ll love it with all of my heart.” She confirmed. Shane kept her gaze at Carmen’s eyes, those beautiful brown eyes that she’s addicted to. That she can’t get rid off. That will haunt her if she said no. “You have always had it…” Shane informed. “You’ve had your chance, you’ve had your second, your third, fourth…” Shane shakes her head realizing that she is back in square one.

     

    “Okay, so I screwed up… many times. I’m a complete bitch for cheating on you, lying to you. I’m a fucked up person for all the shit that I’ve done. I’m… I’m a horrible mother! Leaving our daughter alone by her self… Oh my god…” Carmen put her hand on her forehead and took deep breaths in, realizing again her faults. Thinking to her self what have happened. Thinking how sorry she is. “I, I know what I did Shane. You don’t have to remind me okay… I know that I’ve hurt you many times. I know that. But it hurts me the most you know… it hurts me the most to know that I actually fucking did this to the people I love with my dear life…” Carmen let out. Carmen’s top her self from tearing up again. She wants Shane back, badly. Most of all she wants her family back.

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    1. Shane!!! I love your story no matter what, but I’m a little disappointed that Alice was just dropped by Shane like that. After all they’ve been through, Shane could’ve treated her better. PPS!!

    3. hey – so i’m back for a shorttime & I thought i would catch up with your story and wow! I hope you post more soon, this is excellent, but poor Alice. i hope you make everything right. i understand how busy you can get buti hope you finish this story. pps

    5. OMG! You weren’t kidding when you said this chapter was a gonna be a rollercoaster of a ride. Whew! Shane and Carmen modeling together…now that could be HOT!

    6. Yes yes yes! I wish there would be a campaign with Shane and Carmen….Oh I can just see the sets, poses, wardrobe or lack thereof, frosty lights etc LMAO. 8p. I feel a sting of sadness for Alice, but does Shane need to be monogamous? Or is she still deeply in love with Carmen? Well, I suppose it’s good for Lily’s sake. Plus, Shane and Carmen are just too hot together. Poor Alice, she was playing with fire and got burned. They could be friends with a lot of tension in between. I dunno, I feel there’s a part to the whole ‘taking Carmen back’ of Shane’s decision that she hasn’t told Alice. PPS!

    8. WTF??!!! I was hoping Helena had schemed a plan for Shane to stay in LA. I don’t know who Shane chooses, but if this story will end up with Shaane and Carmen as a couple then your story is the first Shamren-fic I ever read. And although it would be a good first, I am still hoping Shane and Alice will end up as a couple. ;) I’m looking forward to the modelling gig. :D

    9. OMG!!! WTF??? I can’t wait to see how this model campaign with Shane and Carmen goes!! I wondered how Alice is REALLY going to take seeing Shane and Carmen together in full force! This chapter is amazing!!! Don’t make me wait for too long again for the next chapter!!! OH yeah–where was Lily?? lol PPS!!!

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