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Black – Chapter 17
“Jesus Shane, I’ve seen you naked before…” Said Carmen. “… Where did you get the blood stain??” asked Carmen. She kept looking down at Shane’s shirt and her eyes. Shane shoved both of her hands in her pocket, grabbing hold to the watch and earrings, fiddling with it so she wouldn’t stab her finger again.
“I… my finger practically got stabbed…” Shane looked at Carmen who had a serious face, Shane laughed nervously. “No… it’s just, I just pierced my finger on something…it’s nothing.” Shane lied and nodded. “Uhm… why are you here??” Shane asked awkwardly.
“… I’m still your wife, Shane. I see that you don’t have a ring on your finger…” Carmen said cynically.
“… You know I don’t wear the ring, it bugs me when I cut hair… you know that.” Shane replied back.
“… Right, but I didn’t see you cutting hair tonight…”
“… Carmen…we need to talk…”
Continued from the Planet.
Helena looked at Alice and wondered what she has to say. Now that everybody in the group knows pretty much the low down of Shane’s marriage. Alice looked in between like she’s about to puke or has just found the Holy Grail.
“… Wow. I just need a moment here…” Said the witty blonde, as she looked at the table, cruising all the information she’s just received.
“… Yeah, take all the time you need. I mean this is one of those extremely dramatic moments in your life that you’re going to remember forever and think back when you are bored or something… and also when you made the decision, whatever that is, and your life is going to spectacularly change into something wonderful… or something god-awfully appalling… “Helena said quickly and smiled, taking a sip of her martini.
Everybody looked at Helena curiously, wondering if she’s taken something before they’ve met her tonight.
“Uhh… thanks…” Said Alice cynically.
“… Anyway, I’m just really excited… guess what I just bought, from the meeting before??” Helena asked the girls around the table.
“… Uhm… a Ferrari for your maid?” asked Alice.
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(36 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
I love this story. I can’t wait to find out how Helena and Shane met, and please let Shane and Alice work things out. PMS
I’m with Kamikaze. Is Shane stong enough to let Carmen go? Will she realize that Carmen isn’t good enough for her (anymore)? Good luck with your last year in school! Just post as often as you can. ;)
all thru the story, i was all for shalice. since reading this chapter, i totally want it to change back to sharmen!!!
I miss this story – hope you update again soon
Very good
god!! it was so sad. i want shane to be happy so i am a shalice’s side but dont know too like carm how to get over sharmen. you are really my fav writer. thanks for awesome update. pps!
WOW…I said that last post too, but your writing is brilliant. Alice needs to mark her territory, but is Shane really strong enough to let Carmen go?? PPS
this is really good and i hope that Shane will fight for Alice and not let Carmen get the best of her!! PPS!
ok great post but i guess im in the minority here im a sharmen fan all the way , i love alice but its a little weird for em to think of shane and her together as more than best friends , i love the shane and carmen relationship and i agree with carmen they are meant to be , so for me I hope maybe shane and carmen work things out in this one but i guess i have to wait and see.