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Black – Chapter 17
“You can’t do it… No matter how hard you’re gonna try… You just can’t…” said Carmen, who shrugged at the end of her sentence.
“Carmen, don’t do this. I’m finally happy… for years I’ve been lying to my self that I’m actually happy with what I’ve got… but I wasn’t. Now, now… I just can’t see living my life without her. Without Alice.” Shane let it out, who had a pained face. Somehow feeling guilty for their marriage breakup. She looked at Carmen, who looked hurt and wasn’t ready for Shane’s answer.
“What about me? You’re just letting me go, your wife, of seven years, letting me go… just like that? It’s that fucking easy for you huh…” Carmen said with a broken voice, her folded arms are now on her hips.
“Carmen… I’ve tried. Many times…”
“Give us one more chance… Shane? Baby, we can make this work. I swear to you honey please. Give us another shot…” said Carmen. Her voice trembling with tears brimming in her eyes. She knows it’s her fault, all those mistakes, cheatings, broken promises. Shane couldn’t bear looking at Carmen crying. She looked back down on the floor and let out a big sigh. She hates when girls cry. She cant handle the situation, right now the only thing that will make Carmen feel better is for her to say yes to her plead. And that is not the answer in her mind and in her heart.
“No…” Shane said. Carmen closed her eyes and let her tears runs down her face. She bit her bottom lip as her shoulders starts to shake and the tears in her eyes coming out uncontrollably. She tries to stop it but looked away from Shane. Shane looked away from Carmen crying and put one of her hand on her forehead.
“So this is it?? This is the end??” Carmen asked with her back at Shane. The black mascara smudges on her face and she tries to wipe her tears away that are running down her face. Carmen turns back around to Shane. Shane looked guiltily at Carmen and nodded.
“No… no no no no… Don’t say that baby… You’re breaking my heart here…” Carmen said as she points to her heart and shaking her head left and right.
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(36 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
I love this story. I can’t wait to find out how Helena and Shane met, and please let Shane and Alice work things out. PMS
I’m with Kamikaze. Is Shane stong enough to let Carmen go? Will she realize that Carmen isn’t good enough for her (anymore)? Good luck with your last year in school! Just post as often as you can. ;)
all thru the story, i was all for shalice. since reading this chapter, i totally want it to change back to sharmen!!!
I miss this story – hope you update again soon
Very good
god!! it was so sad. i want shane to be happy so i am a shalice’s side but dont know too like carm how to get over sharmen. you are really my fav writer. thanks for awesome update. pps!
WOW…I said that last post too, but your writing is brilliant. Alice needs to mark her territory, but is Shane really strong enough to let Carmen go?? PPS
this is really good and i hope that Shane will fight for Alice and not let Carmen get the best of her!! PPS!
ok great post but i guess im in the minority here im a sharmen fan all the way , i love alice but its a little weird for em to think of shane and her together as more than best friends , i love the shane and carmen relationship and i agree with carmen they are meant to be , so for me I hope maybe shane and carmen work things out in this one but i guess i have to wait and see.