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Black – Chapter. 18
Carmen got up and turned her back to Shane showing her unzipped dress to her wife. She turned her head to look at Shane. Shane got up and zipped up Carmen’s dress. She held onto Carmen’s shoulders. She kissed softly on her shoulder, from the side slowly to the middle. She moved Carmen’s long brown hair to the side and kissed up her neck and to the crook of her neck. Carmen closed her eyes; she couldn’t help her self any more. The emotion train was about to crash into a ten meter thick of brick wall. Her shoulders starts to shake and lips starts to quiver. Shane immediately moved her self in front of Carmen.
“I’m so sorry.” Carmen squeezed out from her lips between her sobs. Shane looked closely at her wife and caresses her cheeks softly, wanting her wife to stop crying, a sight that she can’t handle, not just her wife, but any girl that cries. She kissed Carmen’s forehead a few times and it made Carmen cry even harder.
“I’m so fucking sorry.” She said again. “Sshhh… Come baby, don’t cry.” Shane tried to comfort her. Carmen put both of her hands on Shane’s bare chest. She gave her a quick kiss on the lips. “I miss you so damn much. Do you know that?? Everyday in London, there isn’t a day goes by where I didn’t think about you…” Carmen said as her tears keep rolling down at the sides of her cheeks. “I miss you too… Sshhh, It’s gonna be okay… don’t cry alright…” Shane whispered softly into Carmen’s ear. ‘
“I really have no idea how to live my life without you Shane…” Carmen confessed. Carmen took a couple of long breaths. Shane continued to wipe the tears away with her thumb nd continued to caress Carmen’s cheek. She waited for Carmen to continue.
“Are you willing to give me another chance?” asked Carmen. Everything stopped at that very moment. That moment that somehow going to change three women’s lives. That moment that will break or make their love life. That moment that will bring so much of emotional pain to one of them. That moment of truth. That moment of another chance.
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Shane!!! I love your story no matter what, but I’m a little disappointed that Alice was just dropped by Shane like that. After all they’ve been through, Shane could’ve treated her better. PPS!!
yay i loved this post .omg it was fantastic cant wait for the next post… im glad shane gave carmen a chance they are meant to be……..
hey – so i’m back for a shorttime & I thought i would catch up with your story and wow! I hope you post more soon, this is excellent, but poor Alice. i hope you make everything right. i understand how busy you can get buti hope you finish this story. pps
Whatever happened to this story? I miss it. Hope all is well.
OMG! You weren’t kidding when you said this chapter was a gonna be a rollercoaster of a ride. Whew! Shane and Carmen modeling together…now that could be HOT!
Yes yes yes! I wish there would be a campaign with Shane and Carmen….Oh I can just see the sets, poses, wardrobe or lack thereof, frosty lights etc LMAO. 8p. I feel a sting of sadness for Alice, but does Shane need to be monogamous? Or is she still deeply in love with Carmen? Well, I suppose it’s good for Lily’s sake. Plus, Shane and Carmen are just too hot together. Poor Alice, she was playing with fire and got burned. They could be friends with a lot of tension in between. I dunno, I feel there’s a part to the whole ‘taking Carmen back’ of Shane’s decision that she hasn’t told Alice. PPS!
yaaay sharmen!!
WTF??!!! I was hoping Helena had schemed a plan for Shane to stay in LA. I don’t know who Shane chooses, but if this story will end up with Shaane and Carmen as a couple then your story is the first Shamren-fic I ever read. And although it would be a good first, I am still hoping Shane and Alice will end up as a couple. ;) I’m looking forward to the modelling gig. :D
OMG!!! WTF??? I can’t wait to see how this model campaign with Shane and Carmen goes!! I wondered how Alice is REALLY going to take seeing Shane and Carmen together in full force! This chapter is amazing!!! Don’t make me wait for too long again for the next chapter!!! OH yeah–where was Lily?? lol PPS!!!
I loved this chapter and I love sharmen…I also feel sorry for Alice but I can’t help being happy for Sharmen.post soon