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    Black – Chapter. 18

    Story written on February 15, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Shane and Carmen, Shane and Alice, Alice and Carmen… Shane and Prada???

     

    “I want to be Mrs. McCutcheon again…” Carmen said as she cracked a smile and giggled nervously. It made Shane grin. Carmen had never fought this hard Shane thought. Maybe this is really it.

     

    “I don’t know Carm…” Shane started. She really didn’t know. “I… I don’t know if I can love you the way I use to.” Shane said to her wife. She took a step back from Carmen and sat on the bed. Carmen picked up her dress off of the hotel floor and slid it back on, not zipping her back revealing her smooth tan back side of her body. She looks down at Shane who has her head down. Carmen kneeled in front of Shane and places both of her hands on Shane’s thighs. Shane looked back up at Carmen and gave her a faint smile, soon her smile turned to a serious look as she started to speak. “I think I’m in love with this girl. With Alice.” Said Shane. “I don’t know what happened. She just dropped like a bomb.” Shane snickered; she can’t believe she’s telling Carmen this. Carmen stood there and listened to what her wife had to say. Shane raked her hair with her two hands fingers, finger combed it. Revealing her forehead and Carmen smile because of how different and innocent she would look.

     

    “I don’t know what to do Carmen…” confessed Shane, she said in a lost voice. Sounding like a person who needed a guide and have lost everything. She sighed to let out the some steam off her crowded mind.

     

    Carmen nodded. She leaned in a bit closer to Shane. “Shane, I can’t force you to love me. I know that. I, I guesses I can’t be mad at you falling for this girl. But, no matter how much I have hurt you and being the adulterous bitch that I was to you. I still am the one for you. I-I don’t know what else to say to you baby… except that I’m asking you for another chance. I know… it is asking a lot, but baby… spending another moment without you… feels like a fucking lifetime. I want our life back Shane… Don’t you want you that?… I Just… I-I don’t think I know… how to live without you.” Right about then, Carmen just dropped the biggest bomb any defense force in the world would have seen, right onto Shane’s lap.

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    1. Shane!!! I love your story no matter what, but I’m a little disappointed that Alice was just dropped by Shane like that. After all they’ve been through, Shane could’ve treated her better. PPS!!

    3. hey – so i’m back for a shorttime & I thought i would catch up with your story and wow! I hope you post more soon, this is excellent, but poor Alice. i hope you make everything right. i understand how busy you can get buti hope you finish this story. pps

    5. OMG! You weren’t kidding when you said this chapter was a gonna be a rollercoaster of a ride. Whew! Shane and Carmen modeling together…now that could be HOT!

    6. Yes yes yes! I wish there would be a campaign with Shane and Carmen….Oh I can just see the sets, poses, wardrobe or lack thereof, frosty lights etc LMAO. 8p. I feel a sting of sadness for Alice, but does Shane need to be monogamous? Or is she still deeply in love with Carmen? Well, I suppose it’s good for Lily’s sake. Plus, Shane and Carmen are just too hot together. Poor Alice, she was playing with fire and got burned. They could be friends with a lot of tension in between. I dunno, I feel there’s a part to the whole ‘taking Carmen back’ of Shane’s decision that she hasn’t told Alice. PPS!

    8. WTF??!!! I was hoping Helena had schemed a plan for Shane to stay in LA. I don’t know who Shane chooses, but if this story will end up with Shaane and Carmen as a couple then your story is the first Shamren-fic I ever read. And although it would be a good first, I am still hoping Shane and Alice will end up as a couple. ;) I’m looking forward to the modelling gig. :D

    9. OMG!!! WTF??? I can’t wait to see how this model campaign with Shane and Carmen goes!! I wondered how Alice is REALLY going to take seeing Shane and Carmen together in full force! This chapter is amazing!!! Don’t make me wait for too long again for the next chapter!!! OH yeah–where was Lily?? lol PPS!!!

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