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Black – Chapter. 18
“And…”
“She said that she doesn’t know how to live without me…” Shane said seriously as stared into Alice’s eyes.
“Huh…” Alice could only let out. She took her gaze away from Shane and nodded.
“And what did you say…”
“I didn’t say anything…” Shane replied back.
“Why are you telling me this??” Alice asked suddenly getting frustrated that their on the topic of Carmen.
“She asked for another chance. She asked me… if I was willing to give her another chance.” Shane let out desperately.
“What are you saying…” Alice asked, holding her breath.
“I told her that I don’t know if I can love her the way I use too…” Shane mentioned.
“Shane…” Alice was getting nervous and confuse by the second. “Can you just tell me…”
“Yes…” Shane cut her off. “I said yes to her. Yes to Carmen.” Shane said.
Alice immediately got up from her seat and head straight towards the door. Shane got up and followed her. Alice grabbed and holds onto the door handle and opened it but soon got shut by Shane from behind. Shane grabbed Alice’s hand hard and turned her around. Alice fought back from the hard grip and struggled her fist away from Shane’s mighty grip. “Alice, please listen to me…”
SMACK!
Shane was blinded for a few seconds by the hard slap. She blinked a few times. She let go of he grip and held onto her jaw. She massaged it with her hand, still feeling the sting of the slap from Alice. She moved her jaw around and looked back to Alice, who is leaning on the door. “Okay, I deserve that…” Shane said.
SMACK!
Shane looked at the direction of where her head turned 90 degrees when she got slapped, again. She shake her head a few times, making her dark bangs falls infront of her face. She turns to face Alice again, hoping for something a little different than another hard slap across the face. “Alice…”
“Don’t! just don’t!” Alice marked her words clearly to Shane. she turned the handle fully this time and got out of Shane’s big office. Alice walked out of the salon, her heels making a loud noise throughout the store. She walked passed Ed and gave him an uncomfortable smile and was replied back with and understood smile and nod. When she got to the door, another lady was walking towards the store. With a big sunglasses on, 5 – inch heels, short shorts and clothes that only looks good on the models in magazines. Alice recognizes her face in an instant. It was Carmen.
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Shane!!! I love your story no matter what, but I’m a little disappointed that Alice was just dropped by Shane like that. After all they’ve been through, Shane could’ve treated her better. PPS!!
yay i loved this post .omg it was fantastic cant wait for the next post… im glad shane gave carmen a chance they are meant to be……..
hey – so i’m back for a shorttime & I thought i would catch up with your story and wow! I hope you post more soon, this is excellent, but poor Alice. i hope you make everything right. i understand how busy you can get buti hope you finish this story. pps
Whatever happened to this story? I miss it. Hope all is well.
OMG! You weren’t kidding when you said this chapter was a gonna be a rollercoaster of a ride. Whew! Shane and Carmen modeling together…now that could be HOT!
Yes yes yes! I wish there would be a campaign with Shane and Carmen….Oh I can just see the sets, poses, wardrobe or lack thereof, frosty lights etc LMAO. 8p. I feel a sting of sadness for Alice, but does Shane need to be monogamous? Or is she still deeply in love with Carmen? Well, I suppose it’s good for Lily’s sake. Plus, Shane and Carmen are just too hot together. Poor Alice, she was playing with fire and got burned. They could be friends with a lot of tension in between. I dunno, I feel there’s a part to the whole ‘taking Carmen back’ of Shane’s decision that she hasn’t told Alice. PPS!
yaaay sharmen!!
WTF??!!! I was hoping Helena had schemed a plan for Shane to stay in LA. I don’t know who Shane chooses, but if this story will end up with Shaane and Carmen as a couple then your story is the first Shamren-fic I ever read. And although it would be a good first, I am still hoping Shane and Alice will end up as a couple. ;) I’m looking forward to the modelling gig. :D
OMG!!! WTF??? I can’t wait to see how this model campaign with Shane and Carmen goes!! I wondered how Alice is REALLY going to take seeing Shane and Carmen together in full force! This chapter is amazing!!! Don’t make me wait for too long again for the next chapter!!! OH yeah–where was Lily?? lol PPS!!!
I loved this chapter and I love sharmen…I also feel sorry for Alice but I can’t help being happy for Sharmen.post soon