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    Black – Chapter. 18

    Story written on February 15, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Shane and Carmen, Shane and Alice, Alice and Carmen… Shane and Prada???

     

    She stopped infront of the glamorous lady, making her stop in her tracks.

    “You must be Carmen right?” Alice asked the stunning lady. Her mascara was wiped down her face from the tears that starts to roll down slowly. “Uhh yeah.” Carmen said, not sure If she should of given out that information to the distraught looking girl. She removed her sunglasses and places it on top of her head. She looked closely at the blonde in front of her, realizing who she is by the second.

     

    Meanwhile in the store, Shane got out of her office and walked slowly with her head down. she looked to see Ed, standing up. She looked at the way where he was looking and saw Alice and Carmen, standing next to each other.

     

    “Oh my god… now, who do we have here… you must be Alice, right?” Carmen said with great interest. She looked at Alice up and down, thinking what made Shane fall hard for this girl. Carmen almost snickered at the sight of Alice.

     

    “Alice!” Shane screamed out as she let go of the door handle. Both ladies turned her attention to Shane. She stood in the middle between Carmen and Alice, afraid that they would start anything physical. Shane turned around to look at Alice.

     

    “Hey…” Shane started.

     

     

    “Don’t worry Shane… I’m just here to say Hi to your pretty wife. So Carmen, She’s all yours now…” Alice finished. She starts walking to her car.

     

    “Alice, wait!” Shane yelled again. Carmen stood there watching the drama unfold, not knowing exactly what to do. Shane raced to Alice’s car; she knocked down the side of Alice’s window motioning her to put the window down. Alice thought she should just get the fuck out of there before she regrets doing anything stupid. She gripped her steering wheel hard and tightly and shut her eyes for a moment. She let out a big sigh and pressed the window button down. “What?!” Alice said bitterly

     

    “I’m fucking sorry okay…” Shane said. Alice laughed and shakes her head.

    “She said that she cant live without me Alice… what the hell am I supposed to do?!” Shane said frustratingly. “I’m going to New York tomorrow… Well, if Ed can find us a ticket.” She informed. Somehow Alice felt a little sting if Shane going away. She looked at Shane’s eyes for a second and looked back at her steering wheel, the pain already seeping through her heart.

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    1. Shane!!! I love your story no matter what, but I’m a little disappointed that Alice was just dropped by Shane like that. After all they’ve been through, Shane could’ve treated her better. PPS!!

    3. hey – so i’m back for a shorttime & I thought i would catch up with your story and wow! I hope you post more soon, this is excellent, but poor Alice. i hope you make everything right. i understand how busy you can get buti hope you finish this story. pps

    5. OMG! You weren’t kidding when you said this chapter was a gonna be a rollercoaster of a ride. Whew! Shane and Carmen modeling together…now that could be HOT!

    6. Yes yes yes! I wish there would be a campaign with Shane and Carmen….Oh I can just see the sets, poses, wardrobe or lack thereof, frosty lights etc LMAO. 8p. I feel a sting of sadness for Alice, but does Shane need to be monogamous? Or is she still deeply in love with Carmen? Well, I suppose it’s good for Lily’s sake. Plus, Shane and Carmen are just too hot together. Poor Alice, she was playing with fire and got burned. They could be friends with a lot of tension in between. I dunno, I feel there’s a part to the whole ‘taking Carmen back’ of Shane’s decision that she hasn’t told Alice. PPS!

    8. WTF??!!! I was hoping Helena had schemed a plan for Shane to stay in LA. I don’t know who Shane chooses, but if this story will end up with Shaane and Carmen as a couple then your story is the first Shamren-fic I ever read. And although it would be a good first, I am still hoping Shane and Alice will end up as a couple. ;) I’m looking forward to the modelling gig. :D

    9. OMG!!! WTF??? I can’t wait to see how this model campaign with Shane and Carmen goes!! I wondered how Alice is REALLY going to take seeing Shane and Carmen together in full force! This chapter is amazing!!! Don’t make me wait for too long again for the next chapter!!! OH yeah–where was Lily?? lol PPS!!!

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