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Blind (Chap 14)
I couldn’t feel my legs… all I could feel was my bursting stomach, light head, her labour breathing, her soft lips, her soft wet tongue, her face radiating heat, my hard thumping heart and her hands snaking up and down my sides and back… I saw stars… I was going to faint…
“Hey, you all still want to play ‘Truth or Dare’?” shouted Alice from the living room.
We stopped our kissing instantly, but still tangled in each other’s arms… leaning on the foreheads, we were trying hard to catch our much needed oxygen.
After our hearts and breathing went back to a more normal rate… she smiled and rubbed her nose on mine… “Shall we?” I bite my bottom lips to stop myself from wanting to devour her again and again… I smiled and nodded a bit… then she leaned in again to steal a quick kiss then untangled ourselves from each other.
“Come on…” she hold out her hand inviting me to take it… I took her hand and together we went back to the living room for the game…
“Well well… it’s about time…” Alice looked up at us noticing our hands, she smiled widely.
“Ok, Tina, spin away…”
I spin the bottle and thank whatever angels or God controlling this, it was pointing at Bette.
“Ok Bette… truth or dare?”
“Truth…” without second thoughts.
“Ok…” I struggled for some question while looking at Bette… hmm… what do I wanted to know about her… hmm…
But then she leaned in and took both of my hands cutting me from my trance of brain storming for question… looking into her soft brown eyes…
“The truth is that I love you… the truth is that I’ve fallen in love with you since I first saw you… or since I first met you… when I first woke up… and the truth is that I want us to be together and hope that you can be my girlfriend…”
I could hear both Alice and Dana sharp intake of breaths.
I was at lost of words… I could feel my face flushed again and warm coursing through my body. Emotions overwhelming… my eyes flooded…
“Oh no!!” Suddenly Alice shouted… “I think I forgot to lock my door!!” She jumped up pulling Dana along and grabbing all their stuff… then in a minute, they were out of the door… “Don’t wait up guys… we won’t be coming back tonight!!”
Bette still holding my hands tightly… but her hands gone cold…
“Bette… I love you too… I’ve been in love with you since… I don’t know… since you were delivered into the hospital ER?” both of us chuckled and my tears still flowing freely. “I had this pull towards you… do you know how scared I was when we were trying to save you? I don’t know… I never had that kind of fear when assisting in other patients’ cases but… I was so afraid of losing you… like you’re one of my love ones… the one I love the most… and I’d never even knew you before that…”
I loose my hands from her hold and grabbed her instead, pulling it to my heart… “And yes, I would love to be your girlfriend…”
With that, we leaned in to hug each other tightly and kissed passionately… to our lost time…
The End?
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(66 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*