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Blind (Chap 14)
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Previously
“You want to go for a movie?” Bette asked nervously.
“Are you asking me out on a date?” I so wanted to challenge her to see if it works to get any hints from her by challenging her.
Bette decided to go along with the flow… “What if I’m…”
Blushed… oh my gosh, this isn’t happening…wait… wait.. just calm…ok…say yes, just say yes… “Y…” the voice stuck in the throat. “Ehem… yes… I would love to…” I couldn’t help but feel so happy and petrified at the same time…
Chapter 14
Bette
I was caught off guard… she was blushing and seemed really happy about that… was she flirting with me? Or was it just her other playfulness? Nah Porter, your mind is corrupting you with false hope… that’s just her playful antic. But I couldn’t help to hope it was really her being flirtatious with me and that was going to be our real date. I put the wishful thoughts away and chimed in this ‘play’.
“Well Ms. Kennard, is 7pm ok? I’ll come by and pick you up my lady…” I bent a little dramatic and put on my mischievous smirk.
Tina
Well… well Porter, you’re gamed… let the games begin…
“Well I’ll be waiting for you then Ms. Porter.” Then I slapped her hand playfully. “Enough for being such a drama queen already…”
We laughed then I linked arms with her and we walked out from the Planet and headed back to our respective… shelter…. Home… well… I guess home is only with her presence…
I was so nervous… my mind kept on shouting happily that I was going on a date with Bette… but another part of me knowing clearly that that was not a real date, just a playful banter we had to flirt and tease each other… Wait a minute… did I just said flirt? *sigh* just let things go as normal as it could be… ok… so I have to wear casually… yeah, wear casual and act casual…
It was a little bit before 7pm when my door bell rang, I quickly ran to the door and grabbed holds of the handle wanting to pull it opened… but wait… I didn’t want to be seen so eager… I calmed, straightened my shirt… breathe… counted to ten when another bell rang… then I opened the door slowly… Oh my goodness… it was like I’d seen her in everything but this before… I didn’t know why every time, her appearance just simply took my breath away, I couldn’t help but roamed her whole length… w-o-w… out of the corner of my roaming eyes I saw her doing the same thing too… I quickly pulled my eyes back to her face waiting to meet her lively brown pool… when she finally looked up from her roaming, “Hi…” I stated sheepishly… partly ashamed of what I had just done and partly because of sudden embarrassment in front of Bette. My face started to feel hot.
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No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*