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Blind (Chap 14)
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“Al… babe… Tina and I grew up together… we have been best friends forever… Tina had been with a few boys when I found out that I was gay… and then I saw this girl that I really liked… but I didn’t know how to kiss a girl so Tina taught me to be confident with myself and taught me how to kiss…”
“I was just kidding… I know you guys are the bestest friend ever… that was hot by the way…” Alice said while licking her lips and eyeing Dana. Both of them leaned in and kissed.
Tina
Bette had stormed off to the kitchen when I French kissing Dana. Although I was kissing Dana, my mind had been Bette who I was kissing all the time. After waiting for a little while, ‘what is she doing there so long and it is so awkward to see your best friend making out in front of you’. So I stood and headed towards the kitchen.
There she was, stood leaning against the kitchen counter with a cold beer in her hand, head and shoulder dropping… I walked over and snuggled up to her side… stretching my hand to get the cold beer. I drank it then I felt her moved away, almost causing me to loose balance. She walked to her kitchen door and looked out to the pool, hands crossed in front of her chest and in deep thoughts.
“A penny for your thoughts…” gosh, I missed those nights when she was in the hospital and I could just stay by her side… seeing her sleeping or talking to her just made me felt so at ease…
She turned to me… looking defeated… then she dropped her head… I lifted my free hand to massage her neck and her shoulder, actually I wanted to touch her to offer her some comfort… like a cat being touched… she stretched her neck and turned from side to side where she wanted me to massage. ‘What’s wrong Bette?’ My heart just ached when I saw her like this.
Again, she looked at me… taking the beer bottle from me and drank it, then she put it on top of the fridge behind me. Her face was really close to mine… my heart started to pound wildly… I looked into her brown pools… after a few seconds… they darkened… I felt her hands snaked around my waist and she pulled me into her forcefully and tightly… my lips crashing into hers and she kissed me tenderly at first… when I didn’t pull away… the kiss turned passionate… at that moment… my heart and centre twitched… I’d longed for this moment for a very long time… since I first saw her… I kissed her back forcefully… both of us had lost so much all this time… both of us bad been missing out so much… the pent up passion and desire for each other seemed like uncontrollable… I didn’t want it to stop… I couldn’t have enough of her… pulling her in… both of us came crashing to the kitchen door… lost in our passion for each other… devouring each other’s mouth… she really taste so good… I sucked on her harder… I felt faint… I lifted my hands around her neck for support and pulled her in closer…she taste so sweet… I tried to suck all the sweet nectar, but the sweetness is never going to be finished… I sucked on her soft tongue… massaging it with my own… it felt ticklish… but it only aroused me more… I fought for dominant with my tongue…
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No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*