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Blind (Chap 16)
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I awoke… dead griping on my pillow… soaked with sweats… my heart was racing million miles per minute… I still felt the pain… fear… lost… it felt so real… it really scared me… I burst into tears… crying out loud… “Tee… I need you…”
Wide awake… I didn’t know what to do… that was my first time having this kind of nightmare since the accident… I thought about everything… but I couldn’t specifically remember what I thought about too… I was freaked out… it felt like my soul had been frightened out my body… I couldn’t control my thoughts anymore… I couldn’t really feel anymore… I felt… numb…
I couldn’t bear myself to see Tina… I didn’t know why… I need to shut her out… I obviously have problem… but I need her… craving for her so much… however another part of me just stopped me from seeing her… I didn’t want her to worry… and as if seeing her would hurt me more… making me more desperate and vulnerable…
Three nights in a row… I had been successfully avoiding Tina… but 3 nights… I had the same dreams… was it because I felt empty inside?
“Alice, could you spend the night with me tonight?”
“Porter… you look like you’ve been run down by a 5 tones carrier… what’s wrong with you?”
‘5 tones carrier…’ I couldn’t help but shivered with fear on that…
“Please?” I had been too scared to sleep alone… at least when Alice is sleeping in the next room… I managed to rest my tired body… but…
“TINAAAA!!!!” Again I sat up in my bed… soaking with sweats… Alice rushed in… I cling onto Alice… tight… in a dead grip… never wanted to let go… I cried my heart out again… the dream seemed so real… it still scared me although it has been four nights in a row now…
“Shhh… shh…”
“Tee…” I really wanted Tina… in between sobs… “Tee…”
“Bette… let me call Tina heh…” Alice trying to get up…
“No… no…” I caught her and pulled her back on my bed…
Again I cried for a moment… when I was quieted down…
“What is it Bette?” Alice asking with all her concern…
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O.o Freaking intense zabo! Wow… This is so full of emotion this one page was a rollercoasterride to remember! I do hope you continue soon! Lovely!
Great Chapter!!!! Thanks
lOVE THE STORY. keep going please…
I don’t think the chapter was horrible at all. I think Bette needs to talk to a professional. Never been there but I think it would be hard knowing you almost died….but look what she has to live for now. Tina. Please post very soon.
Well Zabo, this chappy dose not suck. Looks like they both have a fear of losing each other. So I feel a good long talk is in order.Going past their limits dosn’t have to be a bad thing if they open up and communicate. Hasn’t that always been their problem.I luv this story, just push past it and go girl!!!
It doesn’t suck at all, you may not be happy with it bc as Lament says it doesn’t explain why the hell they’re not ready. From where I see it Tina should get Bette to talk to her about her fears and insecurities, her trauma after the accident. I’d also like to read more about Tina’s feelings, what’s inside her brain…. Trust us, it doesn’t suck.
This chapter is far from sucking…I felt Bette’s anguish…you made it so real. Keep posting…do NOT delete this chapter.
This is a great story, Bette does need therapy
This doesn’t suck – it’s very good actually, but I don’t understand some of it. Is Bette avoiding Tina to keep them from getting too close sexually? If so, why don’t they just talk on the phone? Or is Bette afraid of something else? And why, if they love each other, are they afraid of having or causing the other to orgasm? They need to talk to each other about these things. Please continue zabo!
No no no no no no, Zabo! No suck! Great! Intense! Fear, love, need! Goodie! More! Please? You, great writer! Why, me, write, silly? Hmmm. Here, 2.30 am, late, need sleep! Probably, reason… Thanks!
i think this chapter shows that there’s a great connection between B&T but they have to work on the situation together to keep this connection…great chapter, very intense
This chapter didn’t suck, but it didn’t work for me either, a bit weird but they have a great connection.
suggestions? I suggest that Tina stays and Alice goes over to Dana’s. Tina could plan to stay a few days to take care of Bette; sleep with her but no hanky panky until gradually they get comfortable and at a natural point simply make sweet, tender love…should be easy, these girlz have had plenty of practice making love in everyone else’s story (lmao)…and then thats that hurdle ove and done with…then the rest of their lives can begin…okay??? but hey I know, i have writers bloc frequently…..anywayz whatever u decide PPS
Sounds like Bette may be worried that what she has with Tina could be an illusion waiting for be shattered. Now, this chapter doesn’t suck. I’m a bit unsure how it explains why they aren’t ready to be intimate, but really it doesn’t suck. It could be sort of like an interlude (not THAT type of interlude you perverts =p) as you work out where to take the story. I’m a little stuck on my two stories as well so I know how it feels to try hard and still not feel totally happy with the finished product. Feel free to bounce ideas off of me. =) Anyway back to the chapter. Bette may be a candidate for therapy as her accident was pretty traumatic.
Great chapter…just too short…thanks!
1st?
Bette needs to talk to Tina and together they will find the way to put the nightmares aside, well done zabo!
Finally finished your chapters – and OMG you had us there for a while. You sure know how to bring your readers to the end of their chairs :O) and then back again. Our Bette sure need to let Tina in but I do know what it is like to keep something like what Bette is doing insider herself – it is hard to share but when you do……life is a gift. Post soooooon. Love it
Poor Bette, she and Tina need a talk and Tina will help her to go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks!