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Blind (Chap 16)
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I wanted to bring it up and talk to Alice… but again, I cried… I heard the doorbell faintly… Alice gotten up… “I’ll go see who is it, ok?” I nodded weakly…
The door opened, a comforting figure rushed in with arms wide opened… my sight blurred by my tears…
“Bette… baby…” the soothing voice… I was calmed a bit…
Tina came over on the bed and gathered me in her arms… laying my head on her chest… comforting me…my sobs quieted down… I felt at ease… I should had called and told Tina at the first place…
I tried hard to tell Tina and Alice about the dream in between sobs… Tina started to cry too…
Tina
Seemed like we had screwed it up big time for fooling around over limit… Bette has been avoiding my calls and… I haven’t seen her for the past 3 days.
“This is Bette’s voice mailbox… please leave the message after the beep… beep…”
“Hey Bette… I’ve missed you… can you call me back please? Love you baby…”
I sat there holding the phone… my heart was aching… something wasn’t right… I didn’t know why I could sense something wrong… with Bette…
The front door opened and Dana emerged from outside…
“Hey, early night?” I greeted her with the phone still clinging tightly in my hand… my mind was not at east at all…
“Yea, Alice going to spend the night with Bette…”
‘What? Oh gosh… something must have gone wrong…’
“Why? What’s wrong?”
Dane just shrugged and said, “Al just said they’re having some old pal for old sake time…”
Dana didn’t sound please as well… there we were… two abandoned girlfriends… I wanted to be angry with Bette for ‘abandoning’ me… and causing Alice to ‘abandon’ Dana too… but there was a part of me still shouting there was something terribly wrong…
I couldn’t sleep… after tossing and turning for 2 hours… I wanted to give up… I shut my eyes again… but… gasped… something blur flashing through and I sat up abruptly… “Bette!!!” I threw a sweater on, put on my shoes, grabbed my keys and purse then I headed out towards Bette’s.
The house was dark, I rang on the bell anyway, I heard footsteps from inside and saw the lights on to the front door, the door was pulled opened fast revealing Alice.
“Tina! Thank God you’re here…”
Before I got the chance to respond… she pulled me in and the next thing, I practically ran to Bette’s room with Alice tailing behind. I pushed opened the door lightly, walking in slowly, trying to imagine the worst scene… praying not to see the lifeless Bette that I first saw pushed into the ER… my heart pounded hardly… I shook my head… there I saw her… sitting on her bed… sobbing… looking pale…
“Bette… baby…”
My heart dropped when she looked up… her eyes filled with tears… but I still could see how defeated and helpless she was… a million questions floating through my brain… I raised my arms, walking towards her… gathered her in my arms… ‘Oh Bette…’ I couldn’t bear to see her like this… I tried to comfort her…
Her body vibrated with each sob… my heart clenched tighter each time her pain vibrated into my body… finally she managed to be calmed… and started to tell us about her dreams…
“I gave up to death…” I quivered involuntary… the image of lifeless Bette being pushed into the ER felt fresh… I could imagine every bits of her dream very clearly… I even felt the pain… lost… fear… and I started to cry too…
“Tee… baby… can you stay?” she asked tiredly…
I pushed her unruly locks away from her face and nodded lovingly at her… how I fell in love more with this woman…
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O.o Freaking intense zabo! Wow… This is so full of emotion this one page was a rollercoasterride to remember! I do hope you continue soon! Lovely!
Great Chapter!!!! Thanks
lOVE THE STORY. keep going please…
I don’t think the chapter was horrible at all. I think Bette needs to talk to a professional. Never been there but I think it would be hard knowing you almost died….but look what she has to live for now. Tina. Please post very soon.
Well Zabo, this chappy dose not suck. Looks like they both have a fear of losing each other. So I feel a good long talk is in order.Going past their limits dosn’t have to be a bad thing if they open up and communicate. Hasn’t that always been their problem.I luv this story, just push past it and go girl!!!
It doesn’t suck at all, you may not be happy with it bc as Lament says it doesn’t explain why the hell they’re not ready. From where I see it Tina should get Bette to talk to her about her fears and insecurities, her trauma after the accident. I’d also like to read more about Tina’s feelings, what’s inside her brain…. Trust us, it doesn’t suck.
This chapter is far from sucking…I felt Bette’s anguish…you made it so real. Keep posting…do NOT delete this chapter.
This is a great story, Bette does need therapy
This doesn’t suck – it’s very good actually, but I don’t understand some of it. Is Bette avoiding Tina to keep them from getting too close sexually? If so, why don’t they just talk on the phone? Or is Bette afraid of something else? And why, if they love each other, are they afraid of having or causing the other to orgasm? They need to talk to each other about these things. Please continue zabo!
No no no no no no, Zabo! No suck! Great! Intense! Fear, love, need! Goodie! More! Please? You, great writer! Why, me, write, silly? Hmmm. Here, 2.30 am, late, need sleep! Probably, reason… Thanks!
i think this chapter shows that there’s a great connection between B&T but they have to work on the situation together to keep this connection…great chapter, very intense
This chapter didn’t suck, but it didn’t work for me either, a bit weird but they have a great connection.
suggestions? I suggest that Tina stays and Alice goes over to Dana’s. Tina could plan to stay a few days to take care of Bette; sleep with her but no hanky panky until gradually they get comfortable and at a natural point simply make sweet, tender love…should be easy, these girlz have had plenty of practice making love in everyone else’s story (lmao)…and then thats that hurdle ove and done with…then the rest of their lives can begin…okay??? but hey I know, i have writers bloc frequently…..anywayz whatever u decide PPS
Sounds like Bette may be worried that what she has with Tina could be an illusion waiting for be shattered. Now, this chapter doesn’t suck. I’m a bit unsure how it explains why they aren’t ready to be intimate, but really it doesn’t suck. It could be sort of like an interlude (not THAT type of interlude you perverts =p) as you work out where to take the story. I’m a little stuck on my two stories as well so I know how it feels to try hard and still not feel totally happy with the finished product. Feel free to bounce ideas off of me. =) Anyway back to the chapter. Bette may be a candidate for therapy as her accident was pretty traumatic.
Great chapter…just too short…thanks!
1st?
Bette needs to talk to Tina and together they will find the way to put the nightmares aside, well done zabo!
Finally finished your chapters – and OMG you had us there for a while. You sure know how to bring your readers to the end of their chairs :O) and then back again. Our Bette sure need to let Tina in but I do know what it is like to keep something like what Bette is doing insider herself – it is hard to share but when you do……life is a gift. Post soooooon. Love it
Poor Bette, she and Tina need a talk and Tina will help her to go through this. Ok post soon please, thanks!