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Blind (Chap9)
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“The sparks anymore…” he finished it… so it’s true that we’re both having problems…
The line was quite for a few brief minutes which seemed like forever…
“So I’ll just see you at work…” he stated.
“Ok, bye.” The phone clicked and the dial tone came to my ear nodding the end of this conversation and end of my 3 years relationship… suddenly I feel like such a loser… loser in everything… especially in love… I wanted to cry… but I feel so numb…
On the next morning…
Bette
“Morning…I’m Dana.” chimed a lady’s voice…
I’ve always sit straight up in bed every morning waiting for Tina to come and check on me to see what I needed and feed me breakfast… but… this morning I’ve got only this strange nurse…
“How was your sleep?”
The voice brought me out from my thoughts about… Tina… whom I’m starting to miss and worry…
“Great… erm… where’s Tina?”
The other nurse chuckled a bit then replied “She’s on leave and went back hometown… that girl has been working as if she has no other life… and this is the first time she has taken sometime off to finally go back home which she claims she has missed so much.”
I smiled at the last statement… I do remember Tina telling me how much she has missed her home and her mom’s home cooked meals. But still, I’m disturbed and couldn’t help but feel sad on how she hasn’t come to inform me and bid goodbye… but most of all… I’m really really disappointed that I will not be able to finally see her… I’ve always wanted her to be the first person I see when I gain my eyesight back… and tomorrow is the day… but she’s…
“How long is she going on leave?”
“2 weeks…” Dana continues doing her chorus around the room, and I’m starting to hope that this day to end… but it’s still in the morning…
Tina
Sitting in the plane flying back to North Carolina… my thoughts are full of Bette… I’m so sad… so sad of leaving her and miss her terribly… at the same time… my conscious is beating me of how can I have gotten myself fallen in love with a woman… a woman Tina… can’t you see she’s a woman?!? Are you blind?
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Haha.. sorry Lamentamini… it’s like 2.07am here… and I have work at 8.30am… so… it’s a no for a 3rd chapter… sorry… and why am I still sitting here in front of my computer? Night gals…
Haha.. sorry Lamentamini… it’s like 2.07am here… and I have work at 8.30am… so… it’s a no for a 3rd chapter… sorry… and why am I still sitting here in front of my computer? Night gals…
Wow… Wow… Tina came all the way back? *sigh* Oh my god that first look… The eyes truly are the windows of the soul and Bette just offered her soul to Tina… When will there be a sealing kiss? *lol* I can”t stop loving this story! It truly is one of my favourites! good luck vith your busy day tomorrow! Hope you’ll be able to post soon! HUG
No more Eric…or is there? Tina is raking up the frequent flyer miles huh? That was a quick trip. I am glad Bette can see….yeah! I hope they can explore their feelings. Sometimes when I stay up that late and have to be to work early I just suck it like a champ up and stay up…you know do a marathon day. Good luck with that.
great chapter, i am really glad you posted this one, it made me smile
Awwww… I bet the title no longer bugging me so much… for now. lol, Thanks for posting so soon.
beautiful…so many emotions with just a few words…brilliant
great update longer
Now, how generous of you offering us two new chapters ! I was so delighted discovering your name on the list tonight because, yes, I missed this story so much.And since I didn’t have the opportunity to do it before, let me just say few words about the last chapter before this current one : “Friends… ah, that’s what people do… giving themselves excuses of becoming friends when actually they like the other person… to give themselves excuses of protecting themselves from heart breaking… (…) Protecting their heart themselves = set in a cage to prevail it from any harm… no freedom… they’re hurting themselves even more… suffocating themselves… causing regret… left only ‘friends’ memories… dreams that could never come true…” I so know what you mean here. But anyway, even when friendship can be the only way to openly express true feelings, even if it can be an euphemistic name for love – and the ultimate protection against a one-way love – , that’s a miracle and a lifetime gift. — > I love the way you depict how blindness can also be a figurative one – and so finds a deeply symbolic representation in Bette’s momentary infirmity. Now, since she endly recovered, will she really ‘see’ things correctly, without the ‘blur’ of those fears and misunderstanding – or will this new kind of blindness be, on a particular level, worse than the other one ? God, feelings and insecurities can complicate life so much… — But for now, I’m enjoying so much this very beautiful and touching moment when Bette discovers Tina’s face and how they both let themselves endly see each other’s eyes – and soul. You made a truly wonderful work here, totally melting my heart : thank you so much for that feeling ! I really, really love this deeply endearing story of yours, it’s a jewel.
Say after me Bette,”I LOVE YOU T” see how easy that was. thanks for this Post and the late night for you,everyone needs some beauty sleep thanks
so very glad Tina came back……thanks Zabo
Finally Bette can see her Guardian Angel!
I’m so glad tina went back. Great all you have to do is tell her you love her now. Please post very soon
Oh, thank god she can see! I can’t imagine her doing something not art related. I’m also thrilled that Tina had the good sense to come home. Running away never solves a problem. Thanks for the chapter…looking forward to your next post.
Wow, they fall in love without really seeing each others eyes. The eyes are the window to their souls and neither one were able to see that soul until that moment when T comes to Bette. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one.
so sweet! Tina came back just one day from her departure! they are so in love, now is time to show to each other and to Tina to understand her feelings! well done girl! i like it so much
Please don’t let it be a dream!!! I know it’s not and it’s so damn cute that Tina had came back just to see Bette.
I’m so happy Tina came back. Now all you have to do is get these two to tell each other how they really feel. Anxiously awaiting your next update.
Is good that eric out of the picture. So glad Bette can see it agand and Tina came back to see Bette, this is beautiful and happy for them. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
I think they are dreaming. I don’t think Tina is back that quick.
I’m enjoying this story so much. Thank you for bringing them together. I’m curious about where you’re taking them and look forward to the next chapter.
Glad Eric is out of the picture. Dare we ask for a 3rd chapter today? ;)
Oh these two need there heads banged together, tell her you Love her! Great Great chapter
wow…wowee!!!!PPS
Woooowwwww!!!! Thanks Zabo for this fabulous job! I was expecting a lot from the first time Bette saw Tina and you surely didn’t disappoint! Just brillant!!! Of course Tina came back! How couldn’t she? “I was blind but now I can see!” … both of them! That was a beautiful scene, and I thank you for this fabulous moment. Wherever you take us next, I totally trust and follow you! Isn’t it funny that however much you try to hide your feelings, your eyes will never lie…?
This better not be a dream Zabo or else…..LOL. Glad that Tina broke up with Eric, he was in the way :o))