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Blind (Chap9)
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“Alright… open your eyes slowly.”
My heart is pumping so hard I think it’s going to leap out anytime soon. I slowly open my eyes… scare as hell… they’ve chosen evening time to take off my bandage… with all curtain closed and lights off. Provided only remaining weak evening sun light that has been filtered by the curtains.
My eyes hurt… I tried to get my eyelids lifted.
Finally, I’ve seen a few blurred figures standing around… I can make out… Kit, Alice, a doctor… and at the corner…a nurse… with full hope… but… she’s a brunette… I guess it’s Dana then. Disappointed that Tina is not here… somehow strangely I pull my neck to other side and glance out towards the window besides the door… I can’t pin point it out, but I thought I saw a glimpse of blonde… again… I hate you… why are you pulling this trick on me? (scolding my mind).
I am glad to finally able to see… even if it’s blur…
The doctor lifts my eyelids and flashes his torchlight briefly onto my eyes, and then he told me to follow his fingers movement… I follow.
“Can you see?”
“Yea, but it’s all blur.”
“Well, don’t worry too much about it. It’s because you’ve been wrapped in bandage for quite sometimes, you’ll need sometimes to get a clear vision back… so congratulations Bette.”
“Yey!!” exclaim Alice… both she and Kit come and hug me tightly… I’m so glad and I bet they’re glad too… it feels like a heavy burden off my shoulder… whew…
We talk and are very happy… my visions are still blurring and my eyes starting to get tired, “Sorry guys, my eyes are tired now.”
“Oh, you take a nap Bette.”
“It’s almost past visiting hour as well.” Added Kit.
“Well, we’ll come again tomorrow.”
After a round of hugs, they left and I fell asleep.
Groggily, after sleeping for a few hours… Oh, I can feel her… how great… I’m even dreaming of feeling her here. But still I open my eyes to check.
I see a figure sitting at my bed side… and with the illuminating lights from the corridor, she’s blonde. She leans nearer towards me… my heart is pounding faster… it’s her… her smell… when she’s getting nearer, coming into the ray of light from the corridor… I see her… she has soft and very fair skin… “Tee…” I whisper…. Can’t believe… am I really dreaming? She is so beautiful, her blonde locks hanging loosely… I reach out my hand to tenderly grab hold of those soft blonde locks, push it gently behind her ears. I sit up, and again, I put my fingers starting from her brows, she closes her eyes… I trace down her nose… I can see her nose… my mind is doing a mapping and matching of what I’d touched few weeks ago with what I’m touching and seeing now… sliding down the bridge of her nose… to her cheeks, using my thumbs to rub on her cheeks… and her… lips… I couldn’t believe it… I look into her eyes… her hazel eyes… she’s really beautiful… even prettier than the sketch I had for her… I’m so touched… I look into her eyes… she is looking intently into mine as well… I’m lost… in her soul…
Tina
I can’t breathe… when she’s studying me intently I can’t help but follow her gaze… my heart just melt and swell at the same time… watching her watch over me… this is the greatest view of all…
She looks up into my eyes… that’s when I’ve been given a direct access into her brown pool… into her soul… all our surrounding starting to fed away… I see only her… feel only her… breathe only… her… I’ve never understood how an eye can be the door to our souls until today… this moment… I can see her feelings towards me… I feel so love and in love….
We lock eyes until it is washed away with our tears… my tears have gathered enough to slid down my cheeks… she reach up to wipe them away… but I see her tears running down as well… doing the same, I rub it away with my trembling hands.
“Tee…” she whispered again… and then I stand up and lean in to hug her tight… I shut my eyes… as if I’ve lost her once… I never want to let her go anymore. I feel her encircling her arms tighter as well… We hug and cry for a moment… then loosen our grips on each other.
Bette
I’m so in love with her, I never knew I can love someone so deeply that I become so emotionally vulnerable…
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Haha.. sorry Lamentamini… it’s like 2.07am here… and I have work at 8.30am… so… it’s a no for a 3rd chapter… sorry… and why am I still sitting here in front of my computer? Night gals…
Haha.. sorry Lamentamini… it’s like 2.07am here… and I have work at 8.30am… so… it’s a no for a 3rd chapter… sorry… and why am I still sitting here in front of my computer? Night gals…
Wow… Wow… Tina came all the way back? *sigh* Oh my god that first look… The eyes truly are the windows of the soul and Bette just offered her soul to Tina… When will there be a sealing kiss? *lol* I can”t stop loving this story! It truly is one of my favourites! good luck vith your busy day tomorrow! Hope you’ll be able to post soon! HUG
No more Eric…or is there? Tina is raking up the frequent flyer miles huh? That was a quick trip. I am glad Bette can see….yeah! I hope they can explore their feelings. Sometimes when I stay up that late and have to be to work early I just suck it like a champ up and stay up…you know do a marathon day. Good luck with that.
great chapter, i am really glad you posted this one, it made me smile
Awwww… I bet the title no longer bugging me so much… for now. lol, Thanks for posting so soon.
beautiful…so many emotions with just a few words…brilliant
great update longer
Now, how generous of you offering us two new chapters ! I was so delighted discovering your name on the list tonight because, yes, I missed this story so much.And since I didn’t have the opportunity to do it before, let me just say few words about the last chapter before this current one : “Friends… ah, that’s what people do… giving themselves excuses of becoming friends when actually they like the other person… to give themselves excuses of protecting themselves from heart breaking… (…) Protecting their heart themselves = set in a cage to prevail it from any harm… no freedom… they’re hurting themselves even more… suffocating themselves… causing regret… left only ‘friends’ memories… dreams that could never come true…” I so know what you mean here. But anyway, even when friendship can be the only way to openly express true feelings, even if it can be an euphemistic name for love – and the ultimate protection against a one-way love – , that’s a miracle and a lifetime gift. — > I love the way you depict how blindness can also be a figurative one – and so finds a deeply symbolic representation in Bette’s momentary infirmity. Now, since she endly recovered, will she really ‘see’ things correctly, without the ‘blur’ of those fears and misunderstanding – or will this new kind of blindness be, on a particular level, worse than the other one ? God, feelings and insecurities can complicate life so much… — But for now, I’m enjoying so much this very beautiful and touching moment when Bette discovers Tina’s face and how they both let themselves endly see each other’s eyes – and soul. You made a truly wonderful work here, totally melting my heart : thank you so much for that feeling ! I really, really love this deeply endearing story of yours, it’s a jewel.
Say after me Bette,”I LOVE YOU T” see how easy that was. thanks for this Post and the late night for you,everyone needs some beauty sleep thanks
so very glad Tina came back……thanks Zabo
Finally Bette can see her Guardian Angel!
I’m so glad tina went back. Great all you have to do is tell her you love her now. Please post very soon
Oh, thank god she can see! I can’t imagine her doing something not art related. I’m also thrilled that Tina had the good sense to come home. Running away never solves a problem. Thanks for the chapter…looking forward to your next post.
Wow, they fall in love without really seeing each others eyes. The eyes are the window to their souls and neither one were able to see that soul until that moment when T comes to Bette. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one.
so sweet! Tina came back just one day from her departure! they are so in love, now is time to show to each other and to Tina to understand her feelings! well done girl! i like it so much
Please don’t let it be a dream!!! I know it’s not and it’s so damn cute that Tina had came back just to see Bette.
I’m so happy Tina came back. Now all you have to do is get these two to tell each other how they really feel. Anxiously awaiting your next update.
Is good that eric out of the picture. So glad Bette can see it agand and Tina came back to see Bette, this is beautiful and happy for them. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
I think they are dreaming. I don’t think Tina is back that quick.
I’m enjoying this story so much. Thank you for bringing them together. I’m curious about where you’re taking them and look forward to the next chapter.
Glad Eric is out of the picture. Dare we ask for a 3rd chapter today? ;)
Oh these two need there heads banged together, tell her you Love her! Great Great chapter
wow…wowee!!!!PPS
Woooowwwww!!!! Thanks Zabo for this fabulous job! I was expecting a lot from the first time Bette saw Tina and you surely didn’t disappoint! Just brillant!!! Of course Tina came back! How couldn’t she? “I was blind but now I can see!” … both of them! That was a beautiful scene, and I thank you for this fabulous moment. Wherever you take us next, I totally trust and follow you! Isn’t it funny that however much you try to hide your feelings, your eyes will never lie…?
This better not be a dream Zabo or else…..LOL. Glad that Tina broke up with Eric, he was in the way :o))