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    Breathe- Chapter 2

    Story written on July 16, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Formatting fixed: Bette finds a way for Tina to leave that room, and her friend, behind

    Waiting. Bette is the first to admit that waiting is not one of her strengths, but she usually could muster enough patience to wait for an elevator. She thought of the cry again. With one last look at the elevator doors, she quickly moved to the stairwell. Not knowing exactly why, Bette took the stairs two at a time and quickly found herself opening the heavy exit door on the fifth floor.

    Her heart ached again upon hearing the cries from down the hall. She turned to see several firemen and two police officers standing in the hallway, hands folded in their front of them almost as if they were paying respects.

    Bette approached the group cautiously. Hey guys, whats up? What are you all doing out here?

    One of the patrol officers who responded to the first call stepped closer to Bette so that he couldnt be overheard in the room. Detective Porter. We havent been able to secure the scene yet due to a, he paused, to the, um, emotional state of a potential witness he finally concluded.

    What do you mean? Bette asked, having forgotten the mournful cry that brought her here and now focused on this obvious lapse of police protocol. You havent secured the scene? Its really quite a simple process, Bette said as if she were giving one of her academy lectures. You move the witness to an interview room at the precinct and contain the crime scene and evidence before it is lost or contaminated.

    The patrol officer looked at his shoes, knowing he was not making a good impression on a Detective who could make or break his future career with one call to his supervisor.

    It just wasnt quite that simple in this case, he finally said weakly.

    Bette shook her head and moved past him. I will deal with you, all of you, she eyed the five men standing in the hallway, later.

    Bette was still irritated as she roughly brushed past the five men who looked like they wanted to be anywhere but where they were standing.

    Bette entered the room and then simply stopped. There was no dramatic wail to freeze her in her tracks, no emotional outburst, and no violent scene that needed to be contained.

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    3. Wow. Those were 2 great chapters with a very original story. The formatting problem: if you are posting from an Apple computer you won’t see the editing tools available to Windows based PC’s and there is nothing you can do.

    7. Sox, you know I have read so many stories, all of them I feel; yet this story, after so many, is the one which has enticed my first comment. I felt inclined to write due to the great imagination, attention to detail and fine writing woven into your story. I love tina/bette stories I must admit and yours, is tops, a truly great piece. Thank you for your effort…

    13. Sox,
      Brilliant beginning! Marvelous and magnificent mystery!
      Am so glad that you have decided to dip your toes in the fantastic world of fan ficition.
      You have created a unique and perplexing story. This writing is breathtaking as you have taken an over-used genre and breathed life into it.
      You have managed to transfer the horror of the scene without being unnecessarily full of blood and gore. This connection between Bette and Tina is intact and so palpable in your prose.
      I, too, an fascinated and captivated by your tale.
      Please post more real soon,
      A fan.

    18. sox – just today on the treadmill with b&tf we were talking about having something like this for b/t. but our thought was somekind of sherlock and dr. watson. but this was great. very original. looking forward to this. post soon.

    21. Ahh…..*rubbing my hands together*. What a great start, I know I am going to love your writing style. This story is going to be soooo good. Please post soon!!!!

    25. What a joy to add an other story in my own little list of favorite ones !
      You know, you have style. Really. Bringing our famous two in an already engaging and highly dramatic story with an obvious great sense of details and psychology, as well as a true sensitivity – something for which I always have a particular weakness for.
      So thank you a lot for this new and very original story ! Cannot wait your next chapters…

    32. Sox – Awesome beginning! Your writing is so powerful with all the detail and description. Incredibly emotional way for these two to start out. Thanks for joining the fanfic world with your gifts.

    38. wow simply wow… Like everyone else this story line between B&T is outstanding and so imaginative. Your writing rocks and is so full of emotion. Simply wow…

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