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    Breathe- Chapter 2

    Story written on July 16, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55445
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    Formatting fixed: Bette finds a way for Tina to leave that room, and her friend, behind

    Hi Tina, she began, My name is Bette Porter and I am a detective with the Seattle Police Department. Bette wasnt sure Tina was listening until she saw a little glimmer of surprise when she mentioned her chosen profession.

    Bette chose not to fill the silence, letting Tina choose the pace. Finally, after what seemed an eternity Tina quietly said You dont look like a detective.

    Bette let a small smile find her lips and said I have been told that before, but I am very good at what I do. Can you believe that Tina?

    Tina was still stroking Marceys face, and still had her clutched tightly to her but she did lift her eyes to meet Bettes. She sighed Yes I do. I didnt think I could trust anyone right now, but I do trust you. The end of her sentence was barely above a whisper.

    Will you trust me that I know what needs to be done right now? Tina pulled back a bit, knowing in her heart that it was going to involve leaving this room. Still, she met Bettes gaze. It gave her strength but not words. She simply nodded.

    Bette paused, carefully choosing her words. We need to take care of Marcey. We need to take care of you. Will you let us do that?

    Tina bit her lower lip and shook her head as tears she thought she was to tired to shed fell again.

    Bette tenderly touched her elbow and used her thumb and forefinger to raise Tinas eyes back to her own. We need to take care of you, get you away from here. Will you let me do that? Will you let me take you somewhere safe?

    Tinas tears fell faster now. They ran down her cheeks and down Bettes hand until they dropped silently to the floor. She shook her head again, but didnt pull her face from Bettes hand.

    Bette tried again. Please, Tina let me protect you. Let me take you someplace safe.

    Tina shook her head one last time, and the meeting Bettes gaze she quietly said. I have nowhere to go. Bette leaned closer because she could barely hear Tinas words. Tina swallowed to clear her dry throat and then said a bit more loudly, although not much above a whisper I have nowhere else to go, and no one else to turn to.

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    3. Wow. Those were 2 great chapters with a very original story. The formatting problem: if you are posting from an Apple computer you won’t see the editing tools available to Windows based PC’s and there is nothing you can do.

    7. Sox, you know I have read so many stories, all of them I feel; yet this story, after so many, is the one which has enticed my first comment. I felt inclined to write due to the great imagination, attention to detail and fine writing woven into your story. I love tina/bette stories I must admit and yours, is tops, a truly great piece. Thank you for your effort…

    13. Sox,
      Brilliant beginning! Marvelous and magnificent mystery!
      Am so glad that you have decided to dip your toes in the fantastic world of fan ficition.
      You have created a unique and perplexing story. This writing is breathtaking as you have taken an over-used genre and breathed life into it.
      You have managed to transfer the horror of the scene without being unnecessarily full of blood and gore. This connection between Bette and Tina is intact and so palpable in your prose.
      I, too, an fascinated and captivated by your tale.
      Please post more real soon,
      A fan.

    18. sox – just today on the treadmill with b&tf we were talking about having something like this for b/t. but our thought was somekind of sherlock and dr. watson. but this was great. very original. looking forward to this. post soon.

    21. Ahh…..*rubbing my hands together*. What a great start, I know I am going to love your writing style. This story is going to be soooo good. Please post soon!!!!

    25. What a joy to add an other story in my own little list of favorite ones !
      You know, you have style. Really. Bringing our famous two in an already engaging and highly dramatic story with an obvious great sense of details and psychology, as well as a true sensitivity – something for which I always have a particular weakness for.
      So thank you a lot for this new and very original story ! Cannot wait your next chapters…

    32. Sox – Awesome beginning! Your writing is so powerful with all the detail and description. Incredibly emotional way for these two to start out. Thanks for joining the fanfic world with your gifts.

    38. wow simply wow… Like everyone else this story line between B&T is outstanding and so imaginative. Your writing rocks and is so full of emotion. Simply wow…

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