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    Breathe- Chapter 2

    Story written on July 16, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Formatting fixed: Bette finds a way for Tina to leave that room, and her friend, behind

    She simply stopped when her eyes found a young woman, soaked in blood, who was stroking the face of a lifeless form as if her life depended on itnot in the clich sort of waybut as if her actual life depended on it.

    The young woman heard someone else enter the room and looked up to find the first thing that had offered her comforta pair of soft, warm eyes that seemed to understand what the others could not.

    Bette couldnt count how many rooms she had been in that held a lifeless victim and a loved one. What she could tell you, is that she had never felt in any of those rooms the way she did at this very moment.

    Bette wasnt sure if her heart was breaking or slamming in to her chest. She didnt really care. All she knew was that for some reason she wanted to take away all the pain, all the hurt, all the disappointment, all the loneliness she saw in the face that turned to her.

    As their eyes met, Bette gasped audibly as she felt her soul being gently touched. After another brief moment of understanding passed between the two women, Bette more fully absorbed the scene around her.

    It was horrific. It reflected all the anger, all the hate, all the disgust of the serial killer Bette Porter had been tracking for months. She knew his paints and his pallet and she knew that the lifeless woman being held tenderly by her friend was his fourth victim.

    Bette nodded to Jules Thompson who was still kneeling next to Tina and had witnessed the subtle yet electric exchange between the two women. If Bette can connect with her, Thompson thought, we might be able to move her out of this horrible place.

    Hey Bette, Jules said quietly. This is Tina Kennard and her roommate, Marcey Fleming.

    Bette nodded in understanding and then said Jules, why dont you give Tina and I just a minute to talk a little she said this in a quiet and soothing tone so as not to alarm Tina in any way.

    Jules Thompson stood up and moved quietly out of the room. Bette closed the distance between her and Tina slowly and kneeled down next to her.

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    3. Wow. Those were 2 great chapters with a very original story. The formatting problem: if you are posting from an Apple computer you won’t see the editing tools available to Windows based PC’s and there is nothing you can do.

    7. Sox, you know I have read so many stories, all of them I feel; yet this story, after so many, is the one which has enticed my first comment. I felt inclined to write due to the great imagination, attention to detail and fine writing woven into your story. I love tina/bette stories I must admit and yours, is tops, a truly great piece. Thank you for your effort…

    13. Sox,
      Brilliant beginning! Marvelous and magnificent mystery!
      Am so glad that you have decided to dip your toes in the fantastic world of fan ficition.
      You have created a unique and perplexing story. This writing is breathtaking as you have taken an over-used genre and breathed life into it.
      You have managed to transfer the horror of the scene without being unnecessarily full of blood and gore. This connection between Bette and Tina is intact and so palpable in your prose.
      I, too, an fascinated and captivated by your tale.
      Please post more real soon,
      A fan.

    18. sox – just today on the treadmill with b&tf we were talking about having something like this for b/t. but our thought was somekind of sherlock and dr. watson. but this was great. very original. looking forward to this. post soon.

    21. Ahh…..*rubbing my hands together*. What a great start, I know I am going to love your writing style. This story is going to be soooo good. Please post soon!!!!

    25. What a joy to add an other story in my own little list of favorite ones !
      You know, you have style. Really. Bringing our famous two in an already engaging and highly dramatic story with an obvious great sense of details and psychology, as well as a true sensitivity – something for which I always have a particular weakness for.
      So thank you a lot for this new and very original story ! Cannot wait your next chapters…

    32. Sox – Awesome beginning! Your writing is so powerful with all the detail and description. Incredibly emotional way for these two to start out. Thanks for joining the fanfic world with your gifts.

    38. wow simply wow… Like everyone else this story line between B&T is outstanding and so imaginative. Your writing rocks and is so full of emotion. Simply wow…

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